I Choose Rainbows
Viewing comments for Chapter 139 "The Professor"Thoughts from the dark side
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Comment from zeldasmith
And you said you couldn't write. POO!
This is a well-rounded piece of work that tells a story from beginning to end. Needs color and a picture. Well done. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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And you said you couldn't write. POO!
This is a well-rounded piece of work that tells a story from beginning to end. Needs color and a picture. Well done. Keep writing.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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I just gave it a picture. Does it increase the chances of getting better grades or is it strictly visual?
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Well say you have one or at the most two boo boos. If there's a pic and matching background color and the rest of the poems nicely laid out, I'll forgive the boo boos.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
He is a magical person having wisdom in living but he feels awkward at times and feels bewildered, a sceptical persona is well versed, peculiar but interesting, flow of thoughts might have been clearer. 7/701
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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He is a magical person having wisdom in living but he feels awkward at times and feels bewildered, a sceptical persona is well versed, peculiar but interesting, flow of thoughts might have been clearer. 7/701
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Interesting about flow of thoughts. What do you mean?
Comment from 4tun81
I have to admit that I do not know of greg perkins but the way you describe his lifestyle is wonderful. I particularly like the first 3 stanzas. Thanks for posting.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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I have to admit that I do not know of greg perkins but the way you describe his lifestyle is wonderful. I particularly like the first 3 stanzas. Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Thanks for the compliment and review.
Norm
Comment from bossladyone
I like it. The poem is well written and flows nicely. I like the discription you gave about his demeaner. He seems like a cool layed back kind of guy. Than you for sharing
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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I like it. The poem is well written and flows nicely. I like the discription you gave about his demeaner. He seems like a cool layed back kind of guy. Than you for sharing
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Thanks for the review. It is appreciated.
Oorm
Comment from country ranch writer
IT ALL DEPENDS ON WHAT HE HAS DONE IN HIS LIFE WILL HE PERISH FROM THE EARTH WHEN HIS TIME COME OR WILL HE LIFE FOREVER HERE ON EARTH OR WILL HE CHOOSE HEAVEN IF IT IS HIS CHOICE. IT ALL DEPENDS ON SO MUCH WITH A WIZARD
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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IT ALL DEPENDS ON WHAT HE HAS DONE IN HIS LIFE WILL HE PERISH FROM THE EARTH WHEN HIS TIME COME OR WILL HE LIFE FOREVER HERE ON EARTH OR WILL HE CHOOSE HEAVEN IF IT IS HIS CHOICE. IT ALL DEPENDS ON SO MUCH WITH A WIZARD
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Thanks for the review. It is appreciated.
Oorm
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welcome