Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

good alliteration in mirrored in her memories
and in feeling forever the finality
lovely descriptive detail in this poetic portrait of a young girl anticipating a future of happy days :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013

Thanks for the review. The poem is about the innocece of youth.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, sholessjo, you did an excellent job writing this free verse poem about the hope and innocence that a child brings. i wrote one called A Soul Flutters Down about the soul of a child.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013

Thanks for the review. How do I read your poem. I like the title. I can't find anything on Fanstory. There are so many poems.

reply by sweetwoodjax on 16-Jun-2013

click on my profile name and then click on portfolio

Comment from TOMORAL

Excellent

You describe a lovely childhood that so reminds me of my granddaughters. Their love is so unconditional and so real. Life to them is still such a miracle. Thanks for this lovely exceptional poem.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013

Thanks. 3 years of age is so precious and the kids are so innocent, I can't get enoughof them.