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Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a great poem. I will have to try this form sometime. It looks like it would be a challenge. I think the idea of shadows which are pointless has two meanings; very nice on that. And I get there may be a suggestion of a reference to Edgar Allan Poe in the last line. Super!
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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This is a great poem. I will have to try this form sometime. It looks like it would be a challenge. I think the idea of shadows which are pointless has two meanings; very nice on that. And I get there may be a suggestion of a reference to Edgar Allan Poe in the last line. Super!
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Thank you Crystie. You are the first to catch that meaning in the pointless reference, many got hung up on "pore". Yes, I'm a big fan of his. I have a collection of all his works.
Comment from Galactia
Hello, In just heard about this new form, I
'm so excited to try it out today, it looks so fun and difficult which is the combo I love. This is a great poem reflecting the beginning of life's journey towards new and unknown endevoures unsure how it will all pan out, but it's all a learning experience.
great job, please accept my virtual 6.
regards
Tia
reply by the author on 16-May-2013
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Hello, In just heard about this new form, I
'm so excited to try it out today, it looks so fun and difficult which is the combo I love. This is a great poem reflecting the beginning of life's journey towards new and unknown endevoures unsure how it will all pan out, but it's all a learning experience.
great job, please accept my virtual 6.
regards
Tia
Comment Written 16-May-2013
reply by the author on 16-May-2013
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Thank you Tia. I am so excited that you like the form. Yes, give it a try by all means.
Comment from Jina Sarma
sir your idea execution is amazing. you have thought an unique idea to write a poem. keep creating more such ideas. i agree with you that it is tough to compose something like that.
reply by the author on 16-May-2013
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sir your idea execution is amazing. you have thought an unique idea to write a poem. keep creating more such ideas. i agree with you that it is tough to compose something like that.
Comment Written 16-May-2013
reply by the author on 16-May-2013
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Thank you Jina. I surely will.
Comment from Sam Mendonca
I enjoyed reading your poem very much.
It has some very emotional words about life and the way one should deal with daily situations.
The photo is very nice with the poem. :D
reply by the author on 16-May-2013
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I enjoyed reading your poem very much.
It has some very emotional words about life and the way one should deal with daily situations.
The photo is very nice with the poem. :D
Comment Written 15-May-2013
reply by the author on 16-May-2013
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Thank youSam.
Comment from Lucy26
Superbly done. Wish I had six stars to give. Yes it is a clever weave and not easy to do and maintain a coherent theme. It had a nice rhythm. Beginnings start to open new windows,
So only you use every yellowed door
reply by the author on 16-May-2013
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Superbly done. Wish I had six stars to give. Yes it is a clever weave and not easy to do and maintain a coherent theme. It had a nice rhythm. Beginnings start to open new windows,
So only you use every yellowed door
Comment Written 15-May-2013
reply by the author on 16-May-2013
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Thank you Lucy I am please by your response.
Comment from Righteous Riter
I like the way this piece is constructed. The message is clear and to the point. The photo fits this piece perfectly as I think that I will try one. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-May-2013
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I like the way this piece is constructed. The message is clear and to the point. The photo fits this piece perfectly as I think that I will try one. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-May-2013
reply by the author on 16-May-2013
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Thank you Righteous. Yes, give one a try.
Comment from MizKat
Treischel - I think your idea for this poem called a Weave is brilliant. I hope you don't mind if I copy your instructions and someday try my hand at writing one. Kat
reply by the author on 16-May-2013
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Treischel - I think your idea for this poem called a Weave is brilliant. I hope you don't mind if I copy your instructions and someday try my hand at writing one. Kat
Comment Written 15-May-2013
reply by the author on 16-May-2013
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Thank you Mizjat. I hope you do, and good luck.
Comment from trevorletang
Your word weave of Yellowed Door is successful according to your definition. I did not know of this poem format - so thanks for the education - Inspiring and challenging - both your poem as well as the challenge.
reply by the author on 16-May-2013
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Your word weave of Yellowed Door is successful according to your definition. I did not know of this poem format - so thanks for the education - Inspiring and challenging - both your poem as well as the challenge.
Comment Written 15-May-2013
reply by the author on 16-May-2013
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Thank you trevorieketang. By all means give it a try.
Comment from TELLER OF TALES
I can see through the words of the author how excellently written this word weeveis coordinating through every word what the poet guides through his work wonderful piece, I defeneatly recommend it to everyone........THE TELLER OF TALES....
reply by the author on 15-May-2013
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I can see through the words of the author how excellently written this word weeveis coordinating through every word what the poet guides through his work wonderful piece, I defeneatly recommend it to everyone........THE TELLER OF TALES....
Comment Written 15-May-2013
reply by the author on 15-May-2013
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Thank you Teller of Tales. Give it a try.
Comment from Debra White
Ooh, I like this! What a challenging and fun new form you just made up :)
I'm not entirely sure what is meant by 'yellowed door', but I'm happy to mull it over until I get it! Ah...I get it, I just read the top part of your author notes which I'd missed before! Forgive my dizzy self, it's late...! I really like your rhyme pattern and the flow of the poem is lovely.
Thank you for sharing this, I think I'll give your new form a whirl - I like it :) Debra
reply by the author on 15-May-2013
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Ooh, I like this! What a challenging and fun new form you just made up :)
I'm not entirely sure what is meant by 'yellowed door', but I'm happy to mull it over until I get it! Ah...I get it, I just read the top part of your author notes which I'd missed before! Forgive my dizzy self, it's late...! I really like your rhyme pattern and the flow of the poem is lovely.
Thank you for sharing this, I think I'll give your new form a whirl - I like it :) Debra
Comment Written 15-May-2013
reply by the author on 15-May-2013
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Thanks Debra. Yes, give it a try.