A Giddy Neophyte Speaks
A girl's first love6 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
I love the dramatic nature of this declaration of love
excellent knight imagery and enthusiasm that definitely sounds like it is spoken by an impressionable young girl who is thoroughly smitten :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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I love the dramatic nature of this declaration of love
excellent knight imagery and enthusiasm that definitely sounds like it is spoken by an impressionable young girl who is thoroughly smitten :-) Brooke
Comment Written 18-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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Thank you Brooke for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate the encouraging words and that you seem to understand exactly what I was trying to accomplish. Sharing my work is new for me so your feedback means a lot.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Faults? You have none
Except, perhaps,
Being too much of everything
I desire.
I love this part... such honesty. But it IS a flaw in that we have so much more to lose if things go wrong. It's frightening. This is a great "classic style" love poem. Very well done. :)
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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Faults? You have none
Except, perhaps,
Being too much of everything
I desire.
I love this part... such honesty. But it IS a flaw in that we have so much more to lose if things go wrong. It's frightening. This is a great "classic style" love poem. Very well done. :)
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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Thank you for your comments. I appreciate the encouragement and the insight you share. Thanks for taking the time.
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. I adore knights of old. I love the poem. Every one deserves someone who thinks of them that way. Love is blind only to another's faults. That is when the loved one is everything you want. Great work.
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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I love the picture. I adore knights of old. I love the poem. Every one deserves someone who thinks of them that way. Love is blind only to another's faults. That is when the loved one is everything you want. Great work.
Comment Written 01-May-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you. I appreciate the encouragement. Thank you for your comments.
Comment from tedanytime
Reading the rules, reader must say you narrowly held the line within the rules for this contest...although you came dangerously close.
You did not have to use the prohibited terms to get your meaning across.
Wishing you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Reading the rules, reader must say you narrowly held the line within the rules for this contest...although you came dangerously close.
You did not have to use the prohibited terms to get your meaning across.
Wishing you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this poem.
Comment from mikenbel
This is a fun and creative and touching piece of poetry. I like your use of "gallant" and your reference to the "paladin of lore". Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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This is a fun and creative and touching piece of poetry. I like your use of "gallant" and your reference to the "paladin of lore". Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from ronnie k
Good, no excellant twenty century romance you have her, lovely movement and rhyme, loved this "faults........except for being too much of everything..."
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Good, no excellant twenty century romance you have her, lovely movement and rhyme, loved this "faults........except for being too much of everything..."
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you. I appreciate the encouragement.