Temptation wins!
Constant tug of war between mind and intelligence!20 total reviews
Comment from jppoet
HELLO AGAIN AND CONGRATULATIONS. THERE IS PERFECT AFFINITY BETWEEN THE YUMMY PHOTO AND THE TEMPTATIVE AMBIANCE OF YOUR SUPERB POEM, YES, IT IS A POETIC DELECTATION. NAMASTE
JOHN
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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HELLO AGAIN AND CONGRATULATIONS. THERE IS PERFECT AFFINITY BETWEEN THE YUMMY PHOTO AND THE TEMPTATIVE AMBIANCE OF YOUR SUPERB POEM, YES, IT IS A POETIC DELECTATION. NAMASTE
JOHN
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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thank you very much for a lovely review.i enjoyed your language.Are you English? or shouldnt I ask ?i have written a poem about birds which i am not happy with it keep rewriting it. it .
Comment from Robert Loy Gonzalez
I literally just wrote a review on another poet that I admired for the same skill as you. What I mean is that you can take any object such as this temptation and you can poetically write about it and make the reader feel for what you mean. Great work
Rob
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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I literally just wrote a review on another poet that I admired for the same skill as you. What I mean is that you can take any object such as this temptation and you can poetically write about it and make the reader feel for what you mean. Great work
Rob
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Thank you very much for my poems and the kind appreciative words.i was a bit getting fed up of reading about confessions and pain etc.i wanted a change .
Comment from Indie Skreet
great little contender for the competition - a fun write and you brought it to life with the words and excellent choice of picture to accompany, I will be routing for you, best Indie :)
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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great little contender for the competition - a fun write and you brought it to life with the words and excellent choice of picture to accompany, I will be routing for you, best Indie :)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Thank you very much Indie for reading and appreciating .
Comment from Righteous Riter
Wow, I like this. The rhyming is consistent. This piece flows well as the writer doesn't force the rhyming. The photo is fitting for this piece as the reader can feel the tug of war between the mind and the body.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Wow, I like this. The rhyming is consistent. This piece flows well as the writer doesn't force the rhyming. The photo is fitting for this piece as the reader can feel the tug of war between the mind and the body.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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thank you very much for your review and excellent rating.
Comment from Black_Oxygen
Many readers can relate to this poetry. Temptation is
victorious a lot. The attached photo is a befitting
accent that enhances the message. Thank Your of your
creation.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Many readers can relate to this poetry. Temptation is
victorious a lot. The attached photo is a befitting
accent that enhances the message. Thank Your of your
creation.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013
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Yes.! unfortunately.many of us are trying to lose weight .thank you very much.
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hey..Cute and awesome poem you have here. I can certainly identify with this temptation. Great rhyming scheme throughout and I loved the part of that blasted machine..heh heh. I certainly think yours is a strong contest entry. Cheers.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Hey..Cute and awesome poem you have here. I can certainly identify with this temptation. Great rhyming scheme throughout and I loved the part of that blasted machine..heh heh. I certainly think yours is a strong contest entry. Cheers.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Thank you very much.it is so difficult to say no...
Comment from ~Dovey
I liked the rhyme scheme and the picture you chose for illustration. This has an overall very nice presentation. You dealt well with the subject of temptation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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I liked the rhyme scheme and the picture you chose for illustration. This has an overall very nice presentation. You dealt well with the subject of temptation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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thank you very much
Comment from mah1poet
Very nice and "tempting" topic for this poem. Now that it is spring ice cream will be my downfall too. Great rhyme and description too. Thanks for making me hungry. LOL
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Very nice and "tempting" topic for this poem. Now that it is spring ice cream will be my downfall too. Great rhyme and description too. Thanks for making me hungry. LOL
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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thank you very much.sweets are the downfall of many of us.
Comment from Charlene0513
Sweets are the downfall of us all.
It's your intellect that will speak for you and your heart will make the final choice.
Charlene
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Sweets are the downfall of us all.
It's your intellect that will speak for you and your heart will make the final choice.
Charlene
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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yes .but heart does not see sense.
Comment from nancyjam
Oh so tempting. Nothing like ice cream with
chocolate sauce. I try not to have it in the house.(lol)
Clever rhyming and lovely sense of humor as you
relate this age-old battle.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Oh so tempting. Nothing like ice cream with
chocolate sauce. I try not to have it in the house.(lol)
Clever rhyming and lovely sense of humor as you
relate this age-old battle.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.