My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 63 "Embarrassing Mom!!"All of my poems of release.
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Comment from GarthL
This is fantastic Jaq, as a mad soccer lover also I loved this story!! Wish I could have been there to see the exuberant antics, maybe you can send me the copy that was recorded ;-) Good luck in the challenge mate, you'd have my vote for sure. LiveLove'n'Laugh, Garth
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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This is fantastic Jaq, as a mad soccer lover also I loved this story!! Wish I could have been there to see the exuberant antics, maybe you can send me the copy that was recorded ;-) Good luck in the challenge mate, you'd have my vote for sure. LiveLove'n'Laugh, Garth
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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LOL, copies made under pain of death Garth :). Anyway I wouldn't want to scar the Antipodean population too. Thanks for your fun review Garth. Peace n Love xx
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For my eyes only Jaq I promise! Don't be a spoilsport?!
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Hahahahaha just as well there is no evidence :) Jaq xx
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It was a fun write mate, guess I'll have to settle for the great visuals it conjured, I'm really vivid at visualization :0)xox
Comment from janalma
Well written and it made me smile. I can imagine how embarrassed you were. Don't we all do foolish things sometimes just for fun? Didn't see any spag in this and enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Well written and it made me smile. I can imagine how embarrassed you were. Don't we all do foolish things sometimes just for fun? Didn't see any spag in this and enjoyed it.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Thanks very much janalma glad it gave you a smile. Jaq xx
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is very well written my friend you tell the story very well it is funny how embarrassing well done and good luck I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Yes this is very well written my friend you tell the story very well it is funny how embarrassing well done and good luck I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Thanks again Jill you are a star xx
Comment from October21
Jaq... Oh gosh... Found myself cracking up over this! That's just about the most embarrassing thing which can ever happen to a daughter AND a mum...:-) I SO hope you win the challenge! This is just great and loved the moral... Next time I am doing something weird I will check for cameras LOl!!!:D
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Jaq... Oh gosh... Found myself cracking up over this! That's just about the most embarrassing thing which can ever happen to a daughter AND a mum...:-) I SO hope you win the challenge! This is just great and loved the moral... Next time I am doing something weird I will check for cameras LOl!!!:D
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Lol thanks Shenel she's over it now but it took time. :) Jaq xx
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LOL I bet! Loving the contrast of your pieces today, one so hilarious and fun and another dark, serious and sad:-)
Comment from gypsycaravan
My goodness. I won't ever be afraid to relate my embarassing moments. I will feel very bad for you right after I stop laughing. LOL Written like a pro, acted like a fool, scarred daughter for life. Sounds like a normal day to me. Nice work.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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My goodness. I won't ever be afraid to relate my embarassing moments. I will feel very bad for you right after I stop laughing. LOL Written like a pro, acted like a fool, scarred daughter for life. Sounds like a normal day to me. Nice work.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Lol thanks Gypsy. I do get a bit carried away xx
Comment from Indie Skreet
well done Jaq, because you had me laugh out loud at this one. I will be routing for you girl and since a sense of humour is only gifted to the minority here, surely you are in with a good chance, lotsaluck, Indie xx
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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well done Jaq, because you had me laugh out loud at this one. I will be routing for you girl and since a sense of humour is only gifted to the minority here, surely you are in with a good chance, lotsaluck, Indie xx
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Lmao thanks Indie much appreciated girlie xx
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Lmao thanks Indie much appreciated girlie xx
Comment from reconciled
One christmas when I was...ya know...a kid my parents took me shopping at sears with them....when i got there...I seen these display cases with people in there holding presents and stuff....i love presents...and wanted one. ahhh pretty soon they couldn't find me...i was drawing a sizable crowd inside one of display cases ...ripping open another empty box...pissed off and crying....at the cold hearted callusness of the whole season...lmbo- for real...thats a true story love you Michael
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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One christmas when I was...ya know...a kid my parents took me shopping at sears with them....when i got there...I seen these display cases with people in there holding presents and stuff....i love presents...and wanted one. ahhh pretty soon they couldn't find me...i was drawing a sizable crowd inside one of display cases ...ripping open another empty box...pissed off and crying....at the cold hearted callusness of the whole season...lmbo- for real...thats a true story love you Michael
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Lol that is so funny Michael xx
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Yea...now ruined Christmas that year...freakin' manicane's...lol
Comment from Ekim777
A charming piece better told over the din in a pub than to be read as a literary creation. It does draw a smile to the lips which is a safe measure of good writing. I'm not sure why you were embarrassed. If you fell off a horse, would you be embarrassed?-Ekim777
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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A charming piece better told over the din in a pub than to be read as a literary creation. It does draw a smile to the lips which is a safe measure of good writing. I'm not sure why you were embarrassed. If you fell off a horse, would you be embarrassed?-Ekim777
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Ekim the challenge was one of your most embarrasing moments and this was one for me. Thanks for reading Jaq x
Comment from mermaids
This is hilarious. In today's world, all of us are being watched somehow. One never knows. I am glad youw ere so happy that you wanted to express yourself.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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This is hilarious. In today's world, all of us are being watched somehow. One never knows. I am glad youw ere so happy that you wanted to express yourself.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Cheers mermaids glad you saw the funny side of it Jaq xxx
Comment from Gungalo
LOL JC leave it up to web cams. They catch you every time they can. Funny, your daughter was only 13? Oh year, she was definitely embarrassed.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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LOL JC leave it up to web cams. They catch you every time they can. Funny, your daughter was only 13? Oh year, she was definitely embarrassed.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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:) ach you gotta laugh at yourself Gungalo :) xx
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Yep for sure.