Testimony:
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Comment from Just Alyx
Okay Bic, I'm sorry about the mix-up. I finished reading this so that I could leave a review here and swap the other to Chapter One as it should've been.
I hadn't intended to review this, but to have a private chat to you, then I screwed up and had to do it this way to mend the other. I always need a break for a few days when these things happen; I'm too busy and tired to focus properly, obviously (it's good busy, tho). Easter break coming up.
This is geared very specifically for believers through the lovely phrasing. As a non-believer, I don't connect with that language, so it's difficult for me to focus properly on the internal personal story.
I don't feel I can offer you anything of real value, not even an opposite view because you're entitled to yours, same as me. I don't feel the need to oppose something that shows a healing process, regardless of the source of healing, anyway (for this project, specifically). The only thing I can see to offer is that I think this would resonate well with many because it's the language itself, even more than the messages, the delivery, that's effective. I don't know, maybe I'm full of it, but that's what I've got, so there you have it.
All the best with the novel and writing your way through it all. Cheers and enjoy the trip (the good, bad, and ugly, or it doesn't count for much, right?). Hope the break away was refreshing. JA.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Okay Bic, I'm sorry about the mix-up. I finished reading this so that I could leave a review here and swap the other to Chapter One as it should've been.
I hadn't intended to review this, but to have a private chat to you, then I screwed up and had to do it this way to mend the other. I always need a break for a few days when these things happen; I'm too busy and tired to focus properly, obviously (it's good busy, tho). Easter break coming up.
This is geared very specifically for believers through the lovely phrasing. As a non-believer, I don't connect with that language, so it's difficult for me to focus properly on the internal personal story.
I don't feel I can offer you anything of real value, not even an opposite view because you're entitled to yours, same as me. I don't feel the need to oppose something that shows a healing process, regardless of the source of healing, anyway (for this project, specifically). The only thing I can see to offer is that I think this would resonate well with many because it's the language itself, even more than the messages, the delivery, that's effective. I don't know, maybe I'm full of it, but that's what I've got, so there you have it.
All the best with the novel and writing your way through it all. Cheers and enjoy the trip (the good, bad, and ugly, or it doesn't count for much, right?). Hope the break away was refreshing. JA.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Well thats fine with me JA if it works for you then it works for me ... much appreciated.
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Oh, and for the fanship. Thanks, Bic!
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Aha. You're already a fan and that was a reply to my reshuffle fanship. See? I need a longish holiday real bad. Catch ya when I'm saner and you can understand me, heh.
Comment from allborn66
This is a beautiful piece. I love how you logically presented your material. The personal experience made the piece more real and easier to relate to.
Barbara
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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This is a beautiful piece. I love how you logically presented your material. The personal experience made the piece more real and easier to relate to.
Barbara
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you Barbara much appreciated as it is a very real experience for myself and very personal issues to talk of.
Comment from mizzkris20
You've conveyed a strong, spiritual message here. Thank God for his Grace and mercy.
Death could no longer hold me at its mercy. Christ was my life and my passage to a better home.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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You've conveyed a strong, spiritual message here. Thank God for his Grace and mercy.
Death could no longer hold me at its mercy. Christ was my life and my passage to a better home.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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... and is !
Comment from Patricia1
This is interesting and I enjoyed the read. Your message is conveyed very well! We've all fallen short but by the grace of God we can have that life free of condemnation. It's great knowing the best life is yet to come. Thanks for sharing this!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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This is interesting and I enjoyed the read. Your message is conveyed very well! We've all fallen short but by the grace of God we can have that life free of condemnation. It's great knowing the best life is yet to come. Thanks for sharing this!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Excellent glad you could enjoy the read.
