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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
And you didn't win????? This was really clever. I laughed loud at the part where Iggy pulled the cord out of the wall, Lol, and that he'd told the caller to call back, that is so funny, and you make it sound so real! Another fabulous story. Well done, Bill. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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And you didn't win????? This was really clever. I laughed loud at the part where Iggy pulled the cord out of the wall, Lol, and that he'd told the caller to call back, that is so funny, and you make it sound so real! Another fabulous story. Well done, Bill. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from Kiki12
That was definitely worth the visit! LOL Iggy sounds like the near perfect pet rock :0) I love that all of his other bits of enlightenment are well received, but the rolling of the dice without a wrist, that's just inane--
too funny!
Kiki
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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That was definitely worth the visit! LOL Iggy sounds like the near perfect pet rock :0) I love that all of his other bits of enlightenment are well received, but the rolling of the dice without a wrist, that's just inane--
too funny!
Kiki
Comment Written 02-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your pleasant review.
Comment from words
Wry use of some time honored cliches here. You gave me a smile.
The of the pet rock drove the story forward ... we never new what bit of wisdom Iggy would dispense.
Think I need a pet like him in my life. LOL
Hugs, d
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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Wry use of some time honored cliches here. You gave me a smile.
The of the pet rock drove the story forward ... we never new what bit of wisdom Iggy would dispense.
Think I need a pet like him in my life. LOL
Hugs, d
Comment Written 27-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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Thank you for reviewing this. Bill
Comment from poesyapprentice
Um... I found this story to be disjointed and strange, although I'm sure the crazy was intended ; ) It did make me laugh with the silliness of it all so kudos for that. All words were used and it was kept withing word count I believe so good luck in the polls!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2013
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Um... I found this story to be disjointed and strange, although I'm sure the crazy was intended ; ) It did make me laugh with the silliness of it all so kudos for that. All words were used and it was kept withing word count I believe so good luck in the polls!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2013
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Thank you for reviewing this.
Comment from jetmichelle
hehhe That was great. A really fun story is so few words. I don't know who's crazier the fellow talking to Iggy or me for imagining the whole conversation...oh and a rock with a wrist! Good job:)
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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hehhe That was great. A really fun story is so few words. I don't know who's crazier the fellow talking to Iggy or me for imagining the whole conversation...oh and a rock with a wrist! Good job:)
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you for reviewing and enjoying this.
Comment from adewpearl
After one paragraph I'm laughing
I'm groaning at the attempts to get more than a six on one die LOL
I am a huge fan of silly - you could take this on the road if they still had vaudeville :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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After one paragraph I'm laughing
I'm groaning at the attempts to get more than a six on one die LOL
I am a huge fan of silly - you could take this on the road if they still had vaudeville :-) Brooke
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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So glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reviewing it.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
This is a strange story. Iggy had quite a vocabulary for a pet rock. I'm sure he never rolled a dice, being rather immobile.You appear to mmet all the rules and throw in some excellent mental imagery.
Good luck!
Roger
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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This is a strange story. Iggy had quite a vocabulary for a pet rock. I'm sure he never rolled a dice, being rather immobile.You appear to mmet all the rules and throw in some excellent mental imagery.
Good luck!
Roger
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you for reviewing this.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is really a fun piece with a unique concept. I like your conversational tone in relating exploits with Iggy. Seems to be the start of more adventures.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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This is really a fun piece with a unique concept. I like your conversational tone in relating exploits with Iggy. Seems to be the start of more adventures.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encoraging review. I think I might expand on Iggy, now that you've mentioned it.
Comment from justjo66
A delightful short story that is very amusing. It
gave me a smile this morning. Pet rocks can be
quite wise, you know. :o) Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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A delightful short story that is very amusing. It
gave me a smile this morning. Pet rocks can be
quite wise, you know. :o) Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is verywell written, mystery wrtier , you did a great job writing this story about the pet rock that led you down a wrong path of drinking. glad you're not hearing any voices, lol. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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this is verywell written, mystery wrtier , you did a great job writing this story about the pet rock that led you down a wrong path of drinking. glad you're not hearing any voices, lol. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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I'm pleased you liked this. Thank you for your encouraging review.