All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Our Game"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Indie Skreet
Oh my, I love this poem with a vengeance! Obviously, as already awarded highest accolade, my starring is totally irrelevant. I wanted to thank you for reviewing mine and am delighted to see what a talented writer I have found. 'Queen takes all, Kings fall', a most comforting picture for me to conjure up. Thank you for sharing this and I will look forward to reading more of your work. Best, Indie
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013
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Oh my, I love this poem with a vengeance! Obviously, as already awarded highest accolade, my starring is totally irrelevant. I wanted to thank you for reviewing mine and am delighted to see what a talented writer I have found. 'Queen takes all, Kings fall', a most comforting picture for me to conjure up. Thank you for sharing this and I will look forward to reading more of your work. Best, Indie
Comment Written 16-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013
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oh good for you, Indie - I loved writing this poem - with a vengeance, too! GRRRR! :)Sharyn
Comment from chasennov
'Our Game.' This work was very well formulated allowing formal structure and a good rounding of the body to encompass a strong extension to the narrative. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013
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'Our Game.' This work was very well formulated allowing formal structure and a good rounding of the body to encompass a strong extension to the narrative. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2013
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thx so much! :)S
formal structure? good rounding of the body? a strong extension to the narrative? hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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I have just reviewed six different chapters from one writer and gave her exactly the same response. I can assure you that I read every word, but it is difficult to cahnge the report on everyone of fifty reviews. I don't have a dictionary that good. Kind regards.
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sorry Chas - not an okay thing to do and no amount of "I'm busy" rationalization makes it okay to do that, honestly.
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I'm not making excuses. I'm trying to do a job to the best of my ability. When I thank people for reviewing my work, I send the same message to everyone. Anything wrong in that? Like I said. I will give you an independant wording next time. Kind regards.
Comment from linsbm
A relationship will never become boring but sweeter if it is flavored with some mischievousness, naughtiness, quarrel, or other matters of similar sorts. Actually, I enjoyed reading this poem. I felt the real drama in a married life. You surely is an intelligent and versatile writer. God bless. Thanks for sharing.}Lin
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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A relationship will never become boring but sweeter if it is flavored with some mischievousness, naughtiness, quarrel, or other matters of similar sorts. Actually, I enjoyed reading this poem. I felt the real drama in a married life. You surely is an intelligent and versatile writer. God bless. Thanks for sharing.}Lin
Comment Written 15-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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thx so much, Lin! good to access the dark sometimes, yes? :0Sharyn
Comment from Doc Holiday
Are you sure he still in one piece? This sounds very dark and threatening. When he least expects it, huh? Wow!!
You're writing stretches across the emotional barometer from boiling to icy. Hope you had a nice Valentine's Day without any strange incidents....
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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Are you sure he still in one piece? This sounds very dark and threatening. When he least expects it, huh? Wow!!
You're writing stretches across the emotional barometer from boiling to icy. Hope you had a nice Valentine's Day without any strange incidents....
Comment Written 15-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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thx Doc - perhaps I should have qualified to say Hubbie number TWO is fine ... :)))
Comment from Bobbi22
Glad to hear that your hubbie is still in one piece - I was a little worried after reading this rant. Interesting free verse with some alliteration and rhyme. Good connection between the game of chess and the emotions expressed.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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Glad to hear that your hubbie is still in one piece - I was a little worried after reading this rant. Interesting free verse with some alliteration and rhyme. Good connection between the game of chess and the emotions expressed.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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thx so much, RP - hubbie # TWO is alive & well ... not so sure about #1 :)))))
Comment from hopeflys
I really like reading your poem. The words flowed beautiefully together and I really enjoyed reading your piece. Well done. Hopeflys 0:D
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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I really like reading your poem. The words flowed beautiefully together and I really enjoyed reading your piece. Well done. Hopeflys 0:D
Comment Written 15-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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thx very much! :)Sharyn
Comment from terry drake
check mate for sure. When you take your mate to bed you should avoid playing chess. This poem had an attitude and it was well written.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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check mate for sure. When you take your mate to bed you should avoid playing chess. This poem had an attitude and it was well written.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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definitely at attitude, terry! :)))Sharyn
Comment from me_tudor
I loved this poem. So much so I'm going to share it on Facebook for my daughters. They both have had bad man issues and will love this poem. Great job!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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I loved this poem. So much so I'm going to share it on Facebook for my daughters. They both have had bad man issues and will love this poem. Great job!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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nothing like the thought of sweet & final revenge, hmm? Bless you my dear! glad you liked it! :)Sharyn
Comment from jay57
You have painted a very vivid picture of seething hatred and a deeep passion for vengenence.
I could feel it. Excellent work !!
Very good picture choice too...
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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You have painted a very vivid picture of seething hatred and a deeep passion for vengenence.
I could feel it. Excellent work !!
Very good picture choice too...
Comment Written 15-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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thx so much jay! :)Sharyn
Comment from pbroussard209
I love this, as this is often how I feel after my husbands been home too long. (He works away from home two weeks a month) By the end of his two weeks home the kids and I are wound up tight, as he runs a much stricter home than I do. :)
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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I love this, as this is often how I feel after my husbands been home too long. (He works away from home two weeks a month) By the end of his two weeks home the kids and I are wound up tight, as he runs a much stricter home than I do. :)
Comment Written 15-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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aah, we do know that GRRRRRRRRR feeling, don't we? :)Sharyn