Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from nutcase
WOW where have you been hiding this one, wow I am sure glad I found it you are in your loving deep place and I love it. Now every time it rains I will rember this piece and will think again of you and these beautiful words.... I can only hope that some day I will be able to find some one as special and loving as your self to spend my days of growing older with... Love your heart and word and the way youcan share them with me as if you are writting to me each and every letter... Nutcase MADDLY in love with your heart...
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WOW where have you been hiding this one, wow I am sure glad I found it you are in your loving deep place and I love it. Now every time it rains I will rember this piece and will think again of you and these beautiful words.... I can only hope that some day I will be able to find some one as special and loving as your self to spend my days of growing older with... Love your heart and word and the way youcan share them with me as if you are writting to me each and every letter... Nutcase MADDLY in love with your heart...
Comment Written 07-May-2005
Comment from Graceheart
Wonderful poem of thelove going on into the hereafter! Very touching, powerful and moving piece of your heartr Jj! The structure, flow and message were awesome! A beautiful gesture from one life to the next. Bravo!
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Wonderful poem of thelove going on into the hereafter! Very touching, powerful and moving piece of your heartr Jj! The structure, flow and message were awesome! A beautiful gesture from one life to the next. Bravo!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2005
Comment from Diny
How is it I see and feel thoughts within these lines so deep and touching ?
How is it I find meanings that are transending all readers and meant to touch each one individually
How is it I read such love and gentlness with every line and break
It is because I have opened my heart I find so much
Thank you for helping me see
Hugs
Di
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How is it I see and feel thoughts within these lines so deep and touching ?
How is it I find meanings that are transending all readers and meant to touch each one individually
How is it I read such love and gentlness with every line and break
It is because I have opened my heart I find so much
Thank you for helping me see
Hugs
Di
Comment Written 24-Apr-2005
Comment from Marillion
What a great reply to Sengwriter, Jewell, and I'm sure that he appreciates it very much. This is exactly what I'd want to hear as a widower missing his beloved. Nice one.
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What a great reply to Sengwriter, Jewell, and I'm sure that he appreciates it very much. This is exactly what I'd want to hear as a widower missing his beloved. Nice one.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2005
Comment from shelley kaye
beautifully written
and could be so very true
if the loved one hasn't already began her next life
for they could already be right next to them :-)
great job!
thanx for sharing :-)
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beautifully written
and could be so very true
if the loved one hasn't already began her next life
for they could already be right next to them :-)
great job!
thanx for sharing :-)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2005
Comment from Mastery
Wow! You have a masterpiece here. It has so much fantastic imagery, I don't know which is my favorite. Here for instance: "the dewdrops of your love have fallen." and "pitter patter of rain falls upon your face" Good writing...Bob
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Wow! You have a masterpiece here. It has so much fantastic imagery, I don't know which is my favorite. Here for instance: "the dewdrops of your love have fallen." and "pitter patter of rain falls upon your face" Good writing...Bob
Comment Written 24-Apr-2005
Comment from Lainee
Meditation is certainly inspiring some wonderful writing from you lately JJ. This is such an inspiring piece of writing and flows so well with wonderful, yet sad imagery throughout. I think Gautam will love this very much. A lovely dedication of understanding.
Goodluck,
You continue to amaze me,
Lainee :O)
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Meditation is certainly inspiring some wonderful writing from you lately JJ. This is such an inspiring piece of writing and flows so well with wonderful, yet sad imagery throughout. I think Gautam will love this very much. A lovely dedication of understanding.
Goodluck,
You continue to amaze me,
Lainee :O)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2005
Comment from Louanne
A lovely poem rising out of a
beautiful sentiment feel in sympathy
for a friend.
A unique and clever viewpoint to
inspire and soothe the bereaved
and the lonely.
Thank you, dear, for the gift which
arose out of such genuine empathy.
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A lovely poem rising out of a
beautiful sentiment feel in sympathy
for a friend.
A unique and clever viewpoint to
inspire and soothe the bereaved
and the lonely.
Thank you, dear, for the gift which
arose out of such genuine empathy.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2005
Comment from spades1
Damn, thats one fine poem.Thanks for sharing, this is an excellent piece, the imagery is beautiful and the flow is tight as ever. I love this poem, it is sad but uplifting at the same time, beautiful. Thanks again, Tim.
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Damn, thats one fine poem.Thanks for sharing, this is an excellent piece, the imagery is beautiful and the flow is tight as ever. I love this poem, it is sad but uplifting at the same time, beautiful. Thanks again, Tim.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2005
Comment from sengwriter
Me as a reader got engulfed with the emotion punched in the threads of sentiment that you've woven here. I know every bit of your highness of thoughts expressed here has come from your some divine power of inner self. I would suggest to give some note to relate the reality behind this poem. God bless you my friend. Gautam
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Me as a reader got engulfed with the emotion punched in the threads of sentiment that you've woven here. I know every bit of your highness of thoughts expressed here has come from your some divine power of inner self. I would suggest to give some note to relate the reality behind this poem. God bless you my friend. Gautam
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2005