My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 97 "Crucified"All of my poems of release.
8 total reviews
Comment from Jean Lutz
But He arose victorious! Passionate reminder delivered well with color scheme and selected art a perfect touch. Best to you with the entry.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
But He arose victorious! Passionate reminder delivered well with color scheme and selected art a perfect touch. Best to you with the entry.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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Thank you so very much for your lovely review.
Comment from L. Sherman
This is a very powerful piece. Even within the constraints of what it is to be an acrostic poem, you really hit home. And with so few words - there is a lot of strength there.
Well done.
L. Sherman
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
This is a very powerful piece. Even within the constraints of what it is to be an acrostic poem, you really hit home. And with so few words - there is a lot of strength there.
Well done.
L. Sherman
Comment Written 29-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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Thanks L. Sherman your reviews are always much appreciated.
Comment from l.raven
THis is a sad but very true poem. Your colors , your wording and your picture are perfect. A great Acrostic poem. Very well done
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
THis is a sad but very true poem. Your colors , your wording and your picture are perfect. A great Acrostic poem. Very well done
Comment Written 29-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from dancerwriter
Certainly all said above is a truth which we all believe in.Christ's death in pain will never be forgotten, and it gives those who believe, a purpose to continue on.Amazing picture portrays this truth.Lesley.j.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
Certainly all said above is a truth which we all believe in.Christ's death in pain will never be forgotten, and it gives those who believe, a purpose to continue on.Amazing picture portrays this truth.Lesley.j.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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Thanks for a lovely review Lesley.
Comment from adewpearl
a solid acrostic for Crucified, and stunningly illustrated and presented
Strong use of high-impact verbs that add to the intensity of this tragic scene
Excellent consonance of R and N sounds in your first few lines
You capture perfectly the essence of this horrific execution
Brooke
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
a solid acrostic for Crucified, and stunningly illustrated and presented
Strong use of high-impact verbs that add to the intensity of this tragic scene
Excellent consonance of R and N sounds in your first few lines
You capture perfectly the essence of this horrific execution
Brooke
Comment Written 28-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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Thanks for a very detailed and kind review as ever Brooke.
Comment from Galactia
Loive the words crowned with thorns, reminds me of the roman wreaths.
Crowned with thorns
Ridiculed and
Undermined
Christ was
Immortalised
Forever
In sadistic
Excruciating
Death
Great job
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
Loive the words crowned with thorns, reminds me of the roman wreaths.
Crowned with thorns
Ridiculed and
Undermined
Christ was
Immortalised
Forever
In sadistic
Excruciating
Death
Great job
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 28-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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Thanks Tia I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Treischel
A powerfully written and spiritually themed Acrostic poem that gives forth its message smoothly and coherently as it moves along. Great picture. The image of suffering and sacrifice clearly comes through. Well done!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
A powerfully written and spiritually themed Acrostic poem that gives forth its message smoothly and coherently as it moves along. Great picture. The image of suffering and sacrifice clearly comes through. Well done!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2012
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Thanks as always for your wonderful review Treischel.
Comment from Rondeno
This is very cleverly done. The selection of vocabulary is inspired. It deserves wide circulation - for example, as a poster for Holy Week.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012
This is very cleverly done. The selection of vocabulary is inspired. It deserves wide circulation - for example, as a poster for Holy Week.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much my friend. Much appreciated.