My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 116 "Christ."All of my poems of release.
6 total reviews
Comment from October21
Hiya Jaq, lovely to be reviewing your work, this is a lovely acrostic poem about Jesus, though very deep! it's horrible to imagine it happening. Anyway good poem to raise awareness:)
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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Hiya Jaq, lovely to be reviewing your work, this is a lovely acrostic poem about Jesus, though very deep! it's horrible to imagine it happening. Anyway good poem to raise awareness:)
Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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That's exactly it Shenel I could have went all ligbt and fluffy about Him, but these things happened too. Thanks as ever :) Jaq xx
Comment from Treischel
A simply beautiful example of the Acrostic poetic expression with the verse centered on the word -Christ. Stunning, short, stark! The message is clear. Well done!
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2012
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A simply beautiful example of the Acrostic poetic expression with the verse centered on the word -Christ. Stunning, short, stark! The message is clear. Well done!
Comment Written 09-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for your lovely review Treischel. :) Jaq x
Comment from EMB
This most certainly give the most horrific of the details during His final hour. I'm even thinking that you didn't need the picture to have the same effect.
Nice job with the format.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2012
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This most certainly give the most horrific of the details during His final hour. I'm even thinking that you didn't need the picture to have the same effect.
Nice job with the format.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2012
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It wasn't an easy time for Him and most people don't tackle it. Thank you for your very kind review, once again, Edward. :) Jaq x
Comment from Spike the second
Super Acrostic Jaq
This deserves to be entered for a contest. A sure fire winner. What a lovely poem and so well thought out.
Blessings
Spike
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2012
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Super Acrostic Jaq
This deserves to be entered for a contest. A sure fire winner. What a lovely poem and so well thought out.
Blessings
Spike
Comment Written 09-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2012
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Thanks Spike always great to have you review my work :) Jaq x
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend such a strong acrostic that is very well written reminding us all how Christ gave his life for us all in such a painful way well done on this write regards Jill
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2012
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Yes my friend such a strong acrostic that is very well written reminding us all how Christ gave his life for us all in such a painful way well done on this write regards Jill
Comment Written 09-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much Jill, great to see you so active again, you were missed. :) Jaq x
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thank you my friend i still have one week to my mums funeral i just have to keep busy so i dont crack up regards Jill
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Thoughts and prayers with you my friend. :) Jaq x
Comment from Gungalo
This picture is something else altogether and is it an awesome acrostic write girl. It's wonderful and horrible at the same time. Sigh.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2012
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This picture is something else altogether and is it an awesome acrostic write girl. It's wonderful and horrible at the same time. Sigh.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2012
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Thanks Gungalo for your kind words, always appreciated. I'm just playing with different things, trying to get my mojo back. LOL ;) Jaq x
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It's there girlie. Free verse it.