My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 120 "haiku(snow falls gently down)"All of my poems of release.
7 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
That is a good haiku. It is well thought out and too the point. Also, it met the syllable count requirements. Excellent work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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That is a good haiku. It is well thought out and too the point. Also, it met the syllable count requirements. Excellent work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for your lovely review sunni.
Comment from gazzagodbod
so missed the haiku contests i love snow and i love your little poem too well written and a lovely picture too well done and good luck xxgazzaxx
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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so missed the haiku contests i love snow and i love your little poem too well written and a lovely picture too well done and good luck xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thanks gazza, so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hello. Good job with your Haiku. I liked how you didn't repeat the word snow from your first line to the third line using instead, "Soft." Good picture too, Good luck in the contest. Cheers.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Hello. Good job with your Haiku. I liked how you didn't repeat the word snow from your first line to the third line using instead, "Soft." Good picture too, Good luck in the contest. Cheers.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you again Benjamin for your review.
Comment from mtnspirit
Hi,
With all contest requirements met you have painted a lovely image with your words. Good job and best wishes with this contest.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Hi,
With all contest requirements met you have painted a lovely image with your words. Good job and best wishes with this contest.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you mtnspirit, much appreciated.
Comment from Galactia
snow falls gently down
my face is tilted upwards
encounters soft flakes
great job perfect 5'7'5 Haiku format.
Good luck in the contest
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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snow falls gently down
my face is tilted upwards
encounters soft flakes
great job perfect 5'7'5 Haiku format.
Good luck in the contest
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thanks Tia, as always you are so kind.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is an appealing winter image and fits well with something that you love: snowflakes on your face. The form and syllable count are correct according to the rules of this contest. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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This is an appealing winter image and fits well with something that you love: snowflakes on your face. The form and syllable count are correct according to the rules of this contest. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Thanks for your lovely review Jeanie.
Comment from terry drake
Don't catch cold but just enjoy the experience. i liked your haiku and the challenge seems to have been met successfully. You did well, congratulations.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Don't catch cold but just enjoy the experience. i liked your haiku and the challenge seems to have been met successfully. You did well, congratulations.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Thanks so much Terry much appreciated.