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Viewing comments for Chapter 122 "Chaos of the mind - 5-7-5"
All of my poems of release.

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Comment from monkeygrace
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I don't know that any of us understand the complexity of the human state of being. Good note and content for this poem. Kudos.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
    Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from angel123
Exceptional
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I enjoyed reading your well written poem. It flows well and has a deeply profound message. Your artwork choice goes nice with your thoughts.

Angel123

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
    Thank you so much Angel.
Comment from Galactia
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I don't understand 5
the complex human psyche 7
especially mine 5

Excellent written senryu, perfect 5'7'5 syllable count and i loved your satorui last line

well done and Good luck in the contesty

regards
Tia




 Comment Written 03-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
    Thank you so much Tia.
Comment from Bayberry
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LOL The irony is really in evidence here with your creative and humorous words. Do we ever learn to thoroughly understand something so complex as humanity? Great posting.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
    Much appreciated review, many thanks.
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
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Hello. Good choice of words and good attached image. Indeed, the human psyche perhaps is not meant to be understood. Liked your blue formatted words. Good luck and cheers.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
    Thank you so much Benjamin, a lovely review as always.
Comment from dancerwriter
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Glorious picture accompanying the few words relating to ones psyche.I don't try to really understand the complexity of anyones psyche, let alone my own.It brings to mind the ability of being able to understand life. Intriging thoughts. Lesley.j.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
    Many thanks Lesley for you kind review.
Comment from 9999pool
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No one can truly iunderstands oneslf, let alone other. Why we buy so many clothes that we did not wear often, why we work in a job we hate or why we never do the things we really want. And when we say weare short of time, how many hours is 'not short of time' in a day. Understand oneself? Who does anymore, LOl. Good thought and questions for the silly cos they will always comes out with the brightest answers. Cheers.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
    Much appreciated 9999 as always, may thanks for your review.
reply by 9999pool on 03-Dec-2012
    Welcome. Cheers. Richard.