Comment from Indie Skreet

Excellent

simple and beautiful and under read. I thought I would go back to the beginning and I am so glad I did. I will be reading every piece eventually for sure and there are only a few others on here I am interested enough to do want to do that. wow girl, glad I found you :) best Indie

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013

Thanks Indie but there is some fluff in there too...lol. You're a star xx

reply by Indie Skreet on 16-Mar-2013

have you any particular favourites?

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013

Not really as I very rarely rate my work xx

reply by Indie Skreet on 16-Mar-2013

mm.

Comment from Benjamin Valencia

Excellent

Very deep poem. I really enjoy these poems and stories referencing the prodigal son. Good job and hope I can see more of your work. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012

Thank you so much Benjamin what a lovely review.

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

Delightful written nonnet poem.

I cry for you, my prodigal child 9
so rebellious, willful and wild. 8
Your travelled path held no fear, 7
you didn't want me near. 6
I just hoped you knew, 5
that I loved you.4
You're troubled, 3
child of 2
mine 1

perfect syllable count.

I wish you GL in the contest
Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2012

Thanks so much Tia for your very kind review.

Comment from Deorre Leonard

Excellent

Prodical Child. I cry for you my prodical child,so rebelious willful and wild. it has a good flow the picture compliments the poem. Well done. Deorre

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2012

Thanks for the great review once again.

Comment from mommerry

Excellent

This was a well told story in the format you chose. I liked the fact you brought in the rhyming although not required. Good Job.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2012

Your review is much appreciated as ever.