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A Fathers Grieving Heartache.

Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Extra, *Extra-assentialism."
My loss of my only son Jason.

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Comment from Espresso momma
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Well, to be honest, I did not understand this writing at all but I am sure you knew what you were writing about. Thanks for the read Ricky, have a great weekend.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2012
    Wow! It's Ok though!
    Thank You 4 your kind review!
    Ricky1024
Comment from Kyle Renton
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I actually LOVE it I find it to be a very true and emotional piece if read by the right person!
There should be more poems and novels like this on fan story!
Well done
Kyle

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
    Thanks Kyle Renton! Religion and whence are ye from'eth!
    Richard.
    "Ricky1024"