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Comment from ernesto escarro
Someday
Someday you wish to reach the unreachable
glory.
It is a feeling og the living man who wish to let his love one
the will be soon gathered together when life is over.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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Someday
Someday you wish to reach the unreachable
glory.
It is a feeling og the living man who wish to let his love one
the will be soon gathered together when life is over.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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Pleased you liked ' Someday ' thank you so much for your review ernesto
Comment from Terror2s
Excellent poem that flows smoothly. Good use of repetition. I didn't notice any errors, Thank you so much for sharing this piee. T2
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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Excellent poem that flows smoothly. Good use of repetition. I didn't notice any errors, Thank you so much for sharing this piee. T2
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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Thank you and I am so pleased that you enjoyed ' Someday '
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What time is it by you? I am on very early this morning. It is only 645 am here.
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It is 12 noon here
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I have just added a bit more to ' Someday ' if you would care to take another look