haiku (by the falls)
wintry decoration19 total reviews
Comment from donkeyoatey
What a wonderful, descriptive poem, and done so well in so few words! AND a great picture, how can anyone NOT like the line "quartz like crystals bloom? Donkeyoatey
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What a wonderful, descriptive poem, and done so well in so few words! AND a great picture, how can anyone NOT like the line "quartz like crystals bloom? Donkeyoatey
Comment Written 12-Dec-2012
Comment from donaldww
I like your haiku where you liken the quartz-like crystal bloom to winter splash. Everything is frozen in time. In your Author Notes, site should be 'sight'.
Cheers,
and good luck at the voting booth!
Cheers,
DW
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I like your haiku where you liken the quartz-like crystal bloom to winter splash. Everything is frozen in time. In your Author Notes, site should be 'sight'.
Cheers,
and good luck at the voting booth!
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
Comment from mtnspirit
Art is beautiful and your words add winter bliss to the readers mind. Very nice poem. Good job and best wishes in this contest and thank you for sharing.
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Art is beautiful and your words add winter bliss to the readers mind. Very nice poem. Good job and best wishes in this contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
Comment from mermaids
It is beautiful to see the frozen water, Your haiku captures a painting of nature in winter. Winter splash is a fitting last line.
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It is beautiful to see the frozen water, Your haiku captures a painting of nature in winter. Winter splash is a fitting last line.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Your picture is startlingly beautiful. Your words compliment the artwork. Very well done and good luck. Your author notes had the word "goof job" it is a great job,,,,,Jim
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Your picture is startlingly beautiful. Your words compliment the artwork. Very well done and good luck. Your author notes had the word "goof job" it is a great job,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
Comment from l.raven
I think you did a beautiful job. This is one of the things I love so much about Winter. There is so much beauty that goes with all that cold air. A perfect picture.
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I think you did a beautiful job. This is one of the things I love so much about Winter. There is so much beauty that goes with all that cold air. A perfect picture.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
Comment from robyn corum
Yes, I think you've done a remarkable job conveying the picture to the reader. Even without the photo, I can imagine the image. Great job!
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Yes, I think you've done a remarkable job conveying the picture to the reader. Even without the photo, I can imagine the image. Great job!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
Comment from mystery poet
Not a goof!
Where on earth were you.
Never have seen ice like this, not in the south.
Your haiku encases the scene with perfection...
Best wishes to you.
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Not a goof!
Where on earth were you.
Never have seen ice like this, not in the south.
Your haiku encases the scene with perfection...
Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
Comment from mauial
Love the imagery of ice being quartz like crystals by the waterfall that are blooming. Kind of reminds me of those ice sculptures you see.
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Love the imagery of ice being quartz like crystals by the waterfall that are blooming. Kind of reminds me of those ice sculptures you see.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
Excellent nature theme Haiku 3-5-3 poem--true to form. The artwork is absolutely gorgeous! The emphatic last line a great visual: "winter splash". Enjoyed!
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Excellent nature theme Haiku 3-5-3 poem--true to form. The artwork is absolutely gorgeous! The emphatic last line a great visual: "winter splash". Enjoyed!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012