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Comment from mizzkris20
I give to you
This is quite the poem...I enjoyed every
line of it. Romantic and true....so sweet.
Good luck in the contest. You should do fine
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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I give to you
This is quite the poem...I enjoyed every
line of it. Romantic and true....so sweet.
Good luck in the contest. You should do fine
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Hi , I am so glad you enjoyed. ' I give to you ', And I thank you for your review
Comment from EMB
This was a wonderful and warm poem for a loved one. My only reservation is that if you were to promise such things to most anyone, the answer would be yes! LOL The promise of riches alone would attract many unsavory characters in you world. So be careful what you promise if you truly want to know what's in a person's heart. :)
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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This was a wonderful and warm poem for a loved one. My only reservation is that if you were to promise such things to most anyone, the answer would be yes! LOL The promise of riches alone would attract many unsavory characters in you world. So be careful what you promise if you truly want to know what's in a person's heart. :)
Nicely done.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Hi Edward, Thank you for your review
Comment from Dodey
Beautiful work again my friend..I felt my heart melting in the reading..I am an incurable romantic and I think I have just met another in you..Wonderful loving questions posed to the one you love, how could they not say yes to each and every one..Bravo I'm loving your work..clearly straight from the heart..Smiles and Kind regards to you..Dee
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Beautiful work again my friend..I felt my heart melting in the reading..I am an incurable romantic and I think I have just met another in you..Wonderful loving questions posed to the one you love, how could they not say yes to each and every one..Bravo I'm loving your work..clearly straight from the heart..Smiles and Kind regards to you..Dee
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much Dee, and I am so pleased that you have enjoyed ' I give to you '
Comment from k.french
This is a lovely piece of work with lovely words, your poem is also very emotional.I would definitely recommend it to somebody else.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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This is a lovely piece of work with lovely words, your poem is also very emotional.I would definitely recommend it to somebody else.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your six star rating, so glad that you enjoyed ' I give to you '
Comment from samiran
THE POEM HAS BEEN ABLE TO GIVE US A TRUE ROMANTIC SENSE.LOVE FOR NATURE AND INNOCENCY ,TWO QUALITIES OF ROMANTIC POEM ARE QUITE REFLECTED HERE.IT GIVES THE READERS A PICTORIAL BEAUTY.BUT THERE IS A CHANCE TO MAKE IT IMPERSONAL.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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THE POEM HAS BEEN ABLE TO GIVE US A TRUE ROMANTIC SENSE.LOVE FOR NATURE AND INNOCENCY ,TWO QUALITIES OF ROMANTIC POEM ARE QUITE REFLECTED HERE.IT GIVES THE READERS A PICTORIAL BEAUTY.BUT THERE IS A CHANCE TO MAKE IT IMPERSONAL.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Thanky you, it is not a personal poem as you have mentioned. None of my work is, I just write what ever comes into my head and you then read the outcome. All of my work is totally fiction. It is a honour to know though that whilst you have read ' I give to you ' I have portrayed emotions which makes you then think that my poem must of oviously been an outcome of what has happened to me at some point. So I thank you for that
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NO M NOT SAYING THAT IT IS QUITE PERSONAL BUT TO ELEVATE IT INTO THE FEELING OF EVERYONE
Comment from pacific swan
It is a very beautiful poetry.The flow of this poetry is wonderful That how an author promises a rose and wants his/her mate to be mesmerised by the beauty of it and fall in love with him/her in return.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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It is a very beautiful poetry.The flow of this poetry is wonderful That how an author promises a rose and wants his/her mate to be mesmerised by the beauty of it and fall in love with him/her in return.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your comment, pacific swan, and I am so pleased that you enjoyed ' I give to you' You have also described it well
Comment from visionary1234
such wistfulness here and the rose, of course, is the perfect image of unattainable perfection.
If I promised you a Rose ,
Would you be mesmerised by it's(its) beauty
And so would you give to me your love. (?) Your poem is written with lots of questions, but no question marks?
These are only minor spags of course ... doesn't stop me enjoying your lovely piece! Good luck in the contest!
:) Sharyn
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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such wistfulness here and the rose, of course, is the perfect image of unattainable perfection.
If I promised you a Rose ,
Would you be mesmerised by it's(its) beauty
And so would you give to me your love. (?) Your poem is written with lots of questions, but no question marks?
These are only minor spags of course ... doesn't stop me enjoying your lovely piece! Good luck in the contest!
:) Sharyn
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Thanks visionary1234, These slight errors have been rectified , glad you enjoyed ' I give to you ' and so could see the poem first , not the errors
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absolutely - spags are minor things and easily fixed - certainly nothing to do with stars or all that nonsense - so long as the writing itself is good, which yours is my dear! :) Sharyn
Comment from Gert sherwood
Good day to you Parisjean
Now I believe you are referring to a male lover writing this poem to his sweetheart?
I liked it and if I was the lady I would say, "in place of all those beautiful roses,please just promise me your everlasting love and I will give you mine in return."
Gert
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Good day to you Parisjean
Now I believe you are referring to a male lover writing this poem to his sweetheart?
I liked it and if I was the lady I would say, "in place of all those beautiful roses,please just promise me your everlasting love and I will give you mine in return."
Gert
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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You are so sweet
Comment from ernesto escarro
I give to you
A very deep poem to read I like.
If I promised you a thousand Roses
And hand picked every one
And gave to you a key,
Would you then unlock your heart
And set my aching one free.
deep poetry to read, indeed
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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I give to you
A very deep poem to read I like.
If I promised you a thousand Roses
And hand picked every one
And gave to you a key,
Would you then unlock your heart
And set my aching one free.
deep poetry to read, indeed
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Thank you ernesto
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Thank you.
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Thank you emesto, I am so glad you like ' I give to you '
Comment from Thatguypk
Another lovely poem, Parisjean. You write with great emotion.
I hate roses. :-) But I understand that they are an accepted symbol of love.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Another lovely poem, Parisjean. You write with great emotion.
I hate roses. :-) But I understand that they are an accepted symbol of love.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Thank you , it's lovely to know that you enjoy my style of writing