My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 168 "So much choice."All of my poems of release.
23 total reviews
Comment from Bina1
What a terrific poem, a delight to read. I agree, there are so many fine poets here! And yours is great, good luck in the contest, a fine entry.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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What a terrific poem, a delight to read. I agree, there are so many fine poets here! And yours is great, good luck in the contest, a fine entry.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Thank you Bina I love the diversity of styles on here too. :) Jaq x
Comment from Joannforsberg
Earl of Oxford, our Ray,
he makes me smile so wide,
creating children's poems,
that are a fun-packed ride.
I agree... excellent.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2012
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Earl of Oxford, our Ray,
he makes me smile so wide,
creating children's poems,
that are a fun-packed ride.
I agree... excellent.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2012
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He certainly knows how to pen a perfectly metered and fun poem :) Jaq x Thanks for the review.
Comment from MAMONIA
Great idea with this one.I agree that with
all the talent on this site, it is most
difficult to pick just one person.
You did an excellent job with the rhyme and
flow and your descriptions of each person
was fantastic,
Great entry,
best of luck in the contest.
Marie
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2012
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Great idea with this one.I agree that with
all the talent on this site, it is most
difficult to pick just one person.
You did an excellent job with the rhyme and
flow and your descriptions of each person
was fantastic,
Great entry,
best of luck in the contest.
Marie
Comment Written 25-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind review Marie :) Jaq x
Comment from eberry4
Exceptional! I Am so happy you chose to write about several people. I am delighted daily with the words I read on these Fanstory pages. You have delighted me tonight once more. I hope you'll write about me someday.Hint.Hint. Good luck . My vote will be cast now....Eydie
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2012
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Exceptional! I Am so happy you chose to write about several people. I am delighted daily with the words I read on these Fanstory pages. You have delighted me tonight once more. I hope you'll write about me someday.Hint.Hint. Good luck . My vote will be cast now....Eydie
Comment Written 24-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2012
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Wow 6 stars. Thank you so much Eydie, very much appreciated indeed. :) Jaq x
Comment from jshep
Very indecisive is a good description, but I must say the ones you chose to highlight in your poem are definitely some of the finest on this site. You pegged each one so well in your excellent rhyme poem. Very nicely done and a rebel entry. LOL Best of luck. Joyce
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Very indecisive is a good description, but I must say the ones you chose to highlight in your poem are definitely some of the finest on this site. You pegged each one so well in your excellent rhyme poem. Very nicely done and a rebel entry. LOL Best of luck. Joyce
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much jshep, you're very kind. I just couldn't make my mind up at all. LOL :) Jaq x
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, jaq cee, you did a great job writing this quatrain poem about the many talents on fanstory, i enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2012
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this is very well written, jaq cee, you did a great job writing this quatrain poem about the many talents on fanstory, i enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest
Comment Written 20-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much sweetwoodjax there are so many wonderful poets on here. I enjoy reading them all. To be honest I could have went on for another few verses. Had to stop somewhere. :) Jaq x
Comment from EMB
LOL Well, this was a beautiful expression of a copout. (And I loved it.) And I'm sure your mentions will appreciate your splinters as well. :)
Nice work.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2012
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LOL Well, this was a beautiful expression of a copout. (And I loved it.) And I'm sure your mentions will appreciate your splinters as well. :)
Nice work.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2012
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LOL a copout indeed. I admire so many of them. Thanks for your great review :) Jaq x
Comment from Eliza M
Dear Jaq.
I feel so honoured and humbled to be included in your poetic tribute alongside such talented writers. You are most kind.
Your poem is a very well written and worthy entry for the contest. It flows well with rhymes that sit unobtrusively. An entertaining little write. Good luck my friend. Liz.x
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Dear Jaq.
I feel so honoured and humbled to be included in your poetic tribute alongside such talented writers. You are most kind.
Your poem is a very well written and worthy entry for the contest. It flows well with rhymes that sit unobtrusively. An entertaining little write. Good luck my friend. Liz.x
Comment Written 18-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Liz, thank you for such a kind review. A small way of saying thank you for all your help and also because I like your writing. :) Jaq x
Comment from TammyGail
You rock the house of ink sister :) I love it - a little witty ditty indeed and one I so hope I can vote for :) loved the imagery as well - best of luck sister and thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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You rock the house of ink sister :) I love it - a little witty ditty indeed and one I so hope I can vote for :) loved the imagery as well - best of luck sister and thanks for sharing
Comment Written 17-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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As are the others Tammy, you are most welcome. Each one of you have offered me something since I joined Fanstory, I just wanted to give a little back. Thanks for your review :) Jaq x
Comment from dmt1967
This is a cool poem and I can relate to your problem most of them have inspired me too apart from the last one don't know her good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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This is a cool poem and I can relate to your problem most of them have inspired me too apart from the last one don't know her good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 17-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thanks dmt I'm so glad you like it, thanks for the kind words. :) Jaq x