My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 184 "Bitter Quill."All of my poems of release.
5 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is well written my friend a dark poem indeed with strong uses of words and descriptions well done my friend regards Jill
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2012
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This is well written my friend a dark poem indeed with strong uses of words and descriptions well done my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 02-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2012
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Thank you Jill, lovely review as always. Hope you mother is well :) Jaq x
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she slept most of the time i was there the whole 7 hours she has a chest infection and is confused but hopefully as the antibiotics kick in she be fine i am worn out though it was a long day didnt get back from hospital to 2 am the back there for visiting at 12 oclock until 7 got home about 8 30 i must be getting old regards Jill
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I know how you are feeling just now Jill, we have been visiting my Dad who has just had his heart op. He is in Edinburgh for it and we travel through from Dundee. My mum daily. I can only go when I'm not working. Take care of yourself because you'll not be any good to her if you go too far down yourself. xx Jaq
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thank you my friend you to
Comment from TammyGail
Hey there sister - :) rock on happy to see you didn't use names I got tossed in the inky jail for doing so - and I was a bit tipsy last night didn't give a damn - thank you girlie
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2012
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Hey there sister - :) rock on happy to see you didn't use names I got tossed in the inky jail for doing so - and I was a bit tipsy last night didn't give a damn - thank you girlie
Comment Written 02-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2012
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Sorry to hear that Tammy. Hope you enjoyed it. I sometimes write tipsy, better watch myself. A little bit of solidarity doesn't go amiss. :) Jaq x
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Hahaha!!! :)
Comment from Eliza M
Hey Jaq! This is a dark and powerful little piece, sinister and dripping with venom! I guess, as you mention TG as your inspiration for this, that you are referring to the JS saga?
Well composed and great use of alliteration and metaphor.
This one certainly has impact, well done! Liz.x
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2012
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Hey Jaq! This is a dark and powerful little piece, sinister and dripping with venom! I guess, as you mention TG as your inspiration for this, that you are referring to the JS saga?
Well composed and great use of alliteration and metaphor.
This one certainly has impact, well done! Liz.x
Comment Written 02-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2012
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So glad you liked it. Yes I did indeed Liz. I don't know him very well but censorship of any kind does not sit well with me. We are our own censors, we have the free will not to read anything that displeases us. :) Jaq x
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Absolutely! A lesson well learned, especially on this site!!!x
Comment from Earl of Oxford
Hi, Jaq - I only usually review one from each author a day, but just this once.'' :-)
Blimey, this is a bit dark, but sure is dramatic with excellent metaphores and alliteration.
I assume a reviewer has got up your nose. It happens to us all, so best to treat them with contempt if they can't be kind and encouraging when offering critique. Constructive critique should of course be welcomed, but just a few have either no tact or are just nasty by nature.
Watch out for the 'standard' reviewers - they're usually the worse. You can forbid them reviewing by going to 'advanced options' when you post and scrolling down to 'writer reviews' only and clicking and 'save'.
Best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2012
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Hi, Jaq - I only usually review one from each author a day, but just this once.'' :-)
Blimey, this is a bit dark, but sure is dramatic with excellent metaphores and alliteration.
I assume a reviewer has got up your nose. It happens to us all, so best to treat them with contempt if they can't be kind and encouraging when offering critique. Constructive critique should of course be welcomed, but just a few have either no tact or are just nasty by nature.
Watch out for the 'standard' reviewers - they're usually the worse. You can forbid them reviewing by going to 'advanced options' when you post and scrolling down to 'writer reviews' only and clicking and 'save'.
Best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 02-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2012
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Thanks Ray for your great review, once again. I'm sneaking on the site while at work so can't stay on too long. (Well is it lunch time)It was just a wee poem to get something off of my chest. :) Jaq x
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No probs, Jaq.
I guess it maybe something other than the site then, and writing is a great way to 'get things off our chests'.
By the way, I rarely review unpromoted posts or much prose, so just letting you know in case you think I'm ignoring you in future. I already spend far too long on site, so I have to be selfish to a degree.
Hey, I won a 'bonus pump' for reviewing this one, as I spotted and reviewed it as soon as you posted. :-) x
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Not a problem Ray, I am glad of any feedback at all. I do try to promote as many as funds allow :) Jaq x
Comment from Jean Lutz
A chilling read. This gives the reader much to ponder as to the source. Quill and papyrus suggest it is ancient. Modern technology can bring much to light -- but it may be the heart that must figure out if it is true or false.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2012
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A chilling read. This gives the reader much to ponder as to the source. Quill and papyrus suggest it is ancient. Modern technology can bring much to light -- but it may be the heart that must figure out if it is true or false.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your insightful review. :) Jaq x