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The ignored protests.

Weather changes the only language the planet can speak.

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Comment from Carl D. Schultz
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This haiku touches where ecology dwells. And vice-versa is to think in reverse before more damage is done. Stating that God dwells in the ecosystem. Stating that we infringe upon God's dwelling that too, houses humanity.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2012
    @Carl D Schultz thank you your comment is very rich and has range, very wide.
Comment from terry drake
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I believe that ec-o-sys-tem is four syllables that throws your 5-7-5 poem into a tail spin. You could say ecosystem home and qualify for the challenge.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2012
    thank you terry..i gave it a more vowel approach..you must be very keen.