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Comment from tbacha58
The sand's of man trickle and tickle, but God
Dear Lord take my HAND!!!
I am never again, never to be me.
I can not win.
For I am Lost Within.
Hi bro, My heart follows you everywhere, carrying your pain with you.
Maybe another mothers heart can ease your everlasting pain. Much Love Terry (M) Happy New Year, even if it does not matter for you......xoxoxo
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2013
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The sand's of man trickle and tickle, but God
Dear Lord take my HAND!!!
I am never again, never to be me.
I can not win.
For I am Lost Within.
Hi bro, My heart follows you everywhere, carrying your pain with you.
Maybe another mothers heart can ease your everlasting pain. Much Love Terry (M) Happy New Year, even if it does not matter for you......xoxoxo
Comment Written 31-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2013
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Happy New Year!!
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Comment from RaymondJohn
How did you get all the room for the author notes. When I try to post them, I get about a line and a half. It is a very poignant story. The imagery and choice of words build the mood.
Very fine work. Best wishes. Ray.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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How did you get all the room for the author notes. When I try to post them, I get about a line and a half. It is a very poignant story. The imagery and choice of words build the mood.
Very fine work. Best wishes. Ray.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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A better computer or I pray a hell of a lot!
Thanks Sir John,
Ricky1024{Richard}
'the Ricketier.'
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a very sad poem. It seems like poetry has become your life. That nothing else matters and you see no way out. Maybe the last stanza is your only hope. Could it be time to try to write a humorous poem.
The darkness of the shadows looses the walker like the poet is lost in the words he is writing.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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This is a very sad poem. It seems like poetry has become your life. That nothing else matters and you see no way out. Maybe the last stanza is your only hope. Could it be time to try to write a humorous poem.
The darkness of the shadows looses the walker like the poet is lost in the words he is writing.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 18-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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Thanks, "Toilet Bowl Humor" coming tomorrow!
Ricky1024
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You're welcome, Ricky.
Joan