Forever Entangled
Love Poem 5/7/517 total reviews
Comment from Meta~Mark
slow dancing creates
a sensual lover's knot...intertwined like two dolls
never untangled ...bonded as one!
A brilliant short love story!
BRAVO- 6 :)!!!!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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slow dancing creates
a sensual lover's knot...intertwined like two dolls
never untangled ...bonded as one!
A brilliant short love story!
BRAVO- 6 :)!!!!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Oh, Mark you are so kind. I wasn't expr ting this, but I'm delighted. Thank you so much, it means a great deal to me
Comment from sjkelly
Presented a strong image in a few words of dancing with a lover. Nicely done, the format suited the emotion it portrayed. I'll most likely remember this one.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012
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Presented a strong image in a few words of dancing with a lover. Nicely done, the format suited the emotion it portrayed. I'll most likely remember this one.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much
Comment from firenice
A beautiful piece of writing. Thank you very much for sharing it with us. Good luck with the contest and happy writing.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012
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A beautiful piece of writing. Thank you very much for sharing it with us. Good luck with the contest and happy writing.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012
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Thanks
Comment from GWHARGIS
Very visual were your words. The fact that lovers never untangle is interesting. I love the picture. I even used it for a short story. Your poem made a connection that is once in a lifetime. A slow dance with your one true love is very rarely equaled in life. Nice job.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012
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Very visual were your words. The fact that lovers never untangle is interesting. I love the picture. I even used it for a short story. Your poem made a connection that is once in a lifetime. A slow dance with your one true love is very rarely equaled in life. Nice job.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012
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Lovely review, thank you
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. I love the poem. A lover's knot holds you but it doesn't strangle. It just keeps an object safe. Great work.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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I love the picture. I love the poem. A lover's knot holds you but it doesn't strangle. It just keeps an object safe. Great work.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much for this insightful review
Comment from missy98writer
Poet,
Your 5-7-5 love poem is excellently written with romantic imagery.
The art work is lovely you used.
You used great alliteration with the S words.
Your satori line is very good.
I enjoyed all three lines:
slow dancing creates
a sensual lover's knot...
never untangled
I wish you good luck in the contest.
I'd recommend your 5-7-5 love poem to other readers.
Missy.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Poet,
Your 5-7-5 love poem is excellently written with romantic imagery.
The art work is lovely you used.
You used great alliteration with the S words.
Your satori line is very good.
I enjoyed all three lines:
slow dancing creates
a sensual lover's knot...
never untangled
I wish you good luck in the contest.
I'd recommend your 5-7-5 love poem to other readers.
Missy.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thanks, Missy. Thumb coming your way
Comment from Patti R.
I really enjoyed this lovely 5-7-5 poem. I especially was captured by the artwork you chose which lends a folksy feel to the words. Forever Knotted is a perfect title for this little dance! Good luck.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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I really enjoyed this lovely 5-7-5 poem. I especially was captured by the artwork you chose which lends a folksy feel to the words. Forever Knotted is a perfect title for this little dance! Good luck.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thank you for the kind words
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes I liked this a different approach to the contest you have done well with the presentation good luck in the contest regards Jill
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Yes I liked this a different approach to the contest you have done well with the presentation good luck in the contest regards Jill
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thanks, Jill
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very wel written, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the dance of love, i enjoyed reading it. good luck in this contest....
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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this is very wel written, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the dance of love, i enjoyed reading it. good luck in this contest....
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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"The dance of love" - I like that. Thank you so much
Comment from adewpearl
Gorgeous pairing of complementary art and poem
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form
good alliterative pairing of slow and sensual
and good consonance of N sounds in never untangled
that picks up the N sounds of dancing/sensual/knot
and what a sensual scene you create :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Gorgeous pairing of complementary art and poem
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form
good alliterative pairing of slow and sensual
and good consonance of N sounds in never untangled
that picks up the N sounds of dancing/sensual/knot
and what a sensual scene you create :-) Brooke
Comment Written 12-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Brooke, you are too kind. Thank you so much.