My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Perfect World!!"All of my poems of release.
6 total reviews
Comment from nighttripper
It is just past sunrise here where I live and I couldn't have started my day any better than by reading such a positive message in your lovely piece. It's gonna be a good day! Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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It is just past sunrise here where I live and I couldn't have started my day any better than by reading such a positive message in your lovely piece. It's gonna be a good day! Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind words :) Jaq x
Comment from ernesto escarro
Perfect World
It's just in the mind of man.
But when you open your eyes and see everything around, and think what are they in your life, you will notice
the world is holding you.
From the eyes of everyone, this vision is true, if there is love in your heart.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Perfect World
It's just in the mind of man.
But when you open your eyes and see everything around, and think what are they in your life, you will notice
the world is holding you.
From the eyes of everyone, this vision is true, if there is love in your heart.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Thanks Ernesto, the world certainly looks better through the eyes of someone in love :) Jaq x
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Thanks for sharing.
Comment from TammyGail
Wonderfully written like always you
weave such wonders with your ink
lovely use of imagery as well
loved your closing lines and thanks for the notes
thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Wonderfully written like always you
weave such wonders with your ink
lovely use of imagery as well
loved your closing lines and thanks for the notes
thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 09-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Many thanks again Tammy Jaq x
Comment from candi lester
I liked the flow of this poem thought it had over all good rhyming and the picture the poet put with it was very nice and coincided with the message that it brought. I liked and yes would show it to someone else.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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I liked the flow of this poem thought it had over all good rhyming and the picture the poet put with it was very nice and coincided with the message that it brought. I liked and yes would show it to someone else.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Thanks you so much Candi for your kind words, Jaq
Comment from Elladella
Enjoyed your enjoyment of the world.
I particularly liked:
trees and flowers, fed by the sun
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"You have it already" I say with a sigh,
"Look deep inside, it's in your mind's eye"
I dare say it is also in your heart's eye - thank you for that.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Enjoyed your enjoyment of the world.
I particularly liked:
trees and flowers, fed by the sun
... ...
"You have it already" I say with a sigh,
"Look deep inside, it's in your mind's eye"
I dare say it is also in your heart's eye - thank you for that.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Yes Ella I think you are right it can be 'seen' by the heart too
, thank you, Jaq
Comment from terry drake
To be an optimist is a wonderful thing. Your poem was interesting to read and uplifting with attitude. To be surrounded by people like you would be a reward in and of itself. Your rhymes were well chosen.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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To be an optimist is a wonderful thing. Your poem was interesting to read and uplifting with attitude. To be surrounded by people like you would be a reward in and of itself. Your rhymes were well chosen.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Thank you so much Terry, that really means a lot me me. Jaq x