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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL!! You are brilliant at the twist game! I thought this one was hilarious! But, I wonder if he had any friends left the next morning! Lol. You really should publish these stories in a book, they could make even the most miserable person laugh! Another great one, Bill. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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LOL!! You are brilliant at the twist game! I thought this one was hilarious! But, I wonder if he had any friends left the next morning! Lol. You really should publish these stories in a book, they could make even the most miserable person laugh! Another great one, Bill. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes I liked the humor in this short story which is well written and lacking nothing you have done very well I enjoyed good luck regards Jill
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Yes I liked the humor in this short story which is well written and lacking nothing you have done very well I enjoyed good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your kind and enthusiastic review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this story about the man with the plan to dump his fiance and it worked, making her think it was her idea, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this story about the man with the plan to dump his fiance and it worked, making her think it was her idea, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your kind and enthusiastic review.
Comment from adewpearl
Laughing out loud at the muddy blurder line and the clever use of that required word LOL
Great final line as we learn of the speaker's ulterior motives - a fun story that follows the contest rules, too :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Laughing out loud at the muddy blurder line and the clever use of that required word LOL
Great final line as we learn of the speaker's ulterior motives - a fun story that follows the contest rules, too :-) Brooke
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your kind and enthusiastic review.
Comment from sibhus
Inventive use of all the required words. Really liked your use muddy in the charters blurted statement, that was clever. The ending was excellent, a nice twist that I didn't see coming. This makes for a great entry for the contest, and good luck.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Inventive use of all the required words. Really liked your use muddy in the charters blurted statement, that was clever. The ending was excellent, a nice twist that I didn't see coming. This makes for a great entry for the contest, and good luck.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
Comment from TammyGail
Great work crafting this story for the contest - it was well written and expressed.. Clever and wow that was some outburst :) loved your closing lines..great use of imagery - best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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Great work crafting this story for the contest - it was well written and expressed.. Clever and wow that was some outburst :) loved your closing lines..great use of imagery - best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind and enthusiastic review.
Comment from Bina1
This was clever, a twist that took me a moment to realize! Very nicely done, a great entry for the contest you offer here, good luck!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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This was clever, a twist that took me a moment to realize! Very nicely done, a great entry for the contest you offer here, good luck!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind and enthusiastic review.
Comment from Spitfire
LOL at the ending. What a great way to get his girl to break it off, since he didn't have the courage to do it the kind way. Whoops! Maybe this was the kind way. After all, she was too quick to light out with someone else.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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LOL at the ending. What a great way to get his girl to break it off, since he didn't have the courage to do it the kind way. Whoops! Maybe this was the kind way. After all, she was too quick to light out with someone else.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind and enthusiastic review.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Good job. It looks like you did it. You are very clever and did a good job of using all the words and carrying out a plan for him to get out of marriage as well. Well done
Honeycomb
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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Good job. It looks like you did it. You are very clever and did a good job of using all the words and carrying out a plan for him to get out of marriage as well. Well done
Honeycomb
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind and enthusiastic review.
Comment from gazzagodbod
lol great ending my friend your little story is entertaining and makes the reader cringe at his antics great work and good luck in the contest xxgazzaxx
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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lol great ending my friend your little story is entertaining and makes the reader cringe at his antics great work and good luck in the contest xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review.