Comment from Lainee

Excellent

Hi Jewell,

I am sure that when the time is right your song will be heard and will lighten somebody's path in more ways than one. We all have songs hiding in the hallways of our mind awaiting the right door to be opened.

Goodluck,
Lainee :)

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2005

Comment from Graceheart

Excellent

There is soo much love withn these stanzas! You have a soneg in your heart for one and only one! This one will be the true love of your life and the lonly you will ever look for again! The Last but by no means the least! This sone will wait, untouched in your tender heart for that perfect moment to be sung to your forever Love! Awsome poem, you just keep getting softer and more alluring with each write of your deep soul!!! Bravo!!!!

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2005

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

I look forward to hearing your song, when the time is right of course. You have expressed yourself so vividly. For example, "strum of the angel's harp" and music being "birthed". Whata picture. Great stuff.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2005

Comment from #1GRANDMA

Excellent

Love this one. I will be awaiting your song as I know it will make you whole again. Sometimes its good for us to keep our feelings even from ourselves . Keep up the beautiful writings

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2005

Comment from StormyGale

Excellent

Beautiful simply Beautiful

Why do I stay satisfied ? ...............................satisfied?
Why do I allow this song to stay
hidden in my soul's shadow?

PLEASE Let us hear that song ... LoL

I believe you sang it Beautifully!

It's always a pleasure to review your ART

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2005

Comment from Cosette

Excellent

Very nice, free flowing, and full of imagery. I like the supernatural feel to this and the mystery that it conjurs for the reader. To me, this work could be interpreted in several different ways. How wise of you to tease the reader in this way. As it is, you've left it for anyone to see it as they like, not necessarily in the singular way you meant it. Good writing.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2005

Comment from sengwriter

Excellent

It's superb. It's great. You are upbringing something very special, a song of rejuvenation. Let you get all the strengths from this priceless song. We are waiting. So simple still cordial is your appeal throughout the poem. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2005

Comment from Balladeer

Excellent

Song song Blue... singing by the meadow... You rock I love the flow and texture of your poetry! You truly do write from your heart and soul; Peace

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2005

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

another first class poem
from a first class person
you aways portray your words
very poeticly
even the ones i don't care that much for
have great poetic value
...................John

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2005

Comment from fly4hi

Excellent

Sure thing. In school kids used to say, I have a secret.
They didn't. They just wanted attention. So, what do you
really mean? Playin' us like musical instruments or do
you really have a song? Come clean lady. :}
As you can see, it was a provocative write. fly

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2005