Feeding His Faithful
Poetry Biblical Alliteration6 total reviews
Comment from Crackerberries
Loved all the F'words.... great poem and great way of showing the miracle within Faith. Much luck with this one... I think it is very well done.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Loved all the F'words.... great poem and great way of showing the miracle within Faith. Much luck with this one... I think it is very well done.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Thank you CBer! Have a good evening!
Comment from psalmist
Terrific job following the rules of the contest. I enjoyed your alliterative retelling of the feeding of the 4000. Terrific "f" words, each one strong and well-chosen. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Terrific job following the rules of the contest. I enjoyed your alliterative retelling of the feeding of the 4000. Terrific "f" words, each one strong and well-chosen. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Thank you so much for this review, and liking my poem. Were there really 4,000 there? If i had know that, I would have used it in my poem. Once again thank you!
Comment from DBastian
Good job selecting the words for this verse. And nice verse to choose. Yours flows quite nicely, too. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 31-May-2012
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Good job selecting the words for this verse. And nice verse to choose. Yours flows quite nicely, too. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 31-May-2012
reply by the author on 31-May-2012
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Thank you for your thoughts
Comment from Taurean Monkey
What a lot of 'f's! A good response to the biblical alliteration contest. It's great, isn't it, how you can 'turn' a proverb into something so creative and with three words to spare! Good luck with the competition. TMonkey
reply by the author on 31-May-2012
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What a lot of 'f's! A good response to the biblical alliteration contest. It's great, isn't it, how you can 'turn' a proverb into something so creative and with three words to spare! Good luck with the competition. TMonkey
Comment Written 31-May-2012
reply by the author on 31-May-2012
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I couldn't resist the challenge. Thank you for this lovely review - I just wish I could have used an "and or that" LOL
Comment from Barlock
Wow! Not only you managed to communicate a content of the Bible proverb in 9 words, you also went above and beyound the requirements of a contest and had all your words start with same letter - f.
Cool! I wish you good luck in winning this contest. you deserve it.
Cheers,
JB
reply by the author on 31-May-2012
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Wow! Not only you managed to communicate a content of the Bible proverb in 9 words, you also went above and beyound the requirements of a contest and had all your words start with same letter - f.
Cool! I wish you good luck in winning this contest. you deserve it.
Cheers,
JB
Comment Written 31-May-2012
reply by the author on 31-May-2012
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Oh! Your are far too kind. There a couple of REALLY good ones in the !Contest, that truly outshine mine. But you know what, I am loving your review. Thank you
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
You have done really well this reads like a tongue twister but also it is very descriptive ,also beautifully presented good luck regards Jill
reply by the author on 31-May-2012
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You have done really well this reads like a tongue twister but also it is very descriptive ,also beautifully presented good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 31-May-2012
reply by the author on 31-May-2012
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I couldn't resist this contest, and thank you so much for your lovely review!