Poppies
Haiku7 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
What a striking presentation! I admired your use of colors and the treasure metaphor in this 5-7-5 form. Thanks for sharing the awe. -Joan
reply by the author on 31-May-2012
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What a striking presentation! I admired your use of colors and the treasure metaphor in this 5-7-5 form. Thanks for sharing the awe. -Joan
Comment Written 31-May-2012
reply by the author on 31-May-2012
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Thank you!
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. I love the poem. I love poppies. I love the rich hue of their orange color. Your color scheme for this work also enhanced the brilliant orange color. Great work.
reply by the author on 30-May-2012
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I love the picture. I love the poem. I love poppies. I love the rich hue of their orange color. Your color scheme for this work also enhanced the brilliant orange color. Great work.
Comment Written 30-May-2012
reply by the author on 30-May-2012
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Thank you
Comment from ameen786
Brilliant! A wonderful haiku with superb word choice and uniqut/original phrasing, "Drunken orange,"--great concept; perfect picture to enhance the theme. There's been quite some postings lately on poppies.
reply by the author on 29-May-2012
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Brilliant! A wonderful haiku with superb word choice and uniqut/original phrasing, "Drunken orange,"--great concept; perfect picture to enhance the theme. There's been quite some postings lately on poppies.
Comment Written 29-May-2012
reply by the author on 29-May-2012
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Thank you
Comment from Lobengula
That's wonderfully evocative. "Peeping through drunken orange" is a wonderful line. You can imagine a whole field of poppies swaying in the wind, painting the fields with their 'drunken orange'. Very well done, love. Beautifully told in such few words. Love Mike
reply by the author on 29-May-2012
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That's wonderfully evocative. "Peeping through drunken orange" is a wonderful line. You can imagine a whole field of poppies swaying in the wind, painting the fields with their 'drunken orange'. Very well done, love. Beautifully told in such few words. Love Mike
Comment Written 29-May-2012
reply by the author on 29-May-2012
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Thank you :)
Comment from Jacklefty
Red Poppies are my favorit flower. This was a delightful poem., well written for this style of format. "Drunken orange" I love that! This poem reminded me of John McGrae's WW1 poem "In Flanders fields the popies..." (1915)
Jacklefty
reply by the author on 29-May-2012
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Red Poppies are my favorit flower. This was a delightful poem., well written for this style of format. "Drunken orange" I love that! This poem reminded me of John McGrae's WW1 poem "In Flanders fields the popies..." (1915)
Jacklefty
Comment Written 29-May-2012
reply by the author on 29-May-2012
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Thanks :)
Comment from Titanx9
Nice, how can I not like this beautiful haiku when it's abut my State's flower? This is a wonderfully written 5-7-5 poem and the artwork is almost mesmerizing in its beauty.
reply by the author on 29-May-2012
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Nice, how can I not like this beautiful haiku when it's abut my State's flower? This is a wonderfully written 5-7-5 poem and the artwork is almost mesmerizing in its beauty.
Comment Written 29-May-2012
reply by the author on 29-May-2012
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I like poppies on lemon muffins. But lately the flower seems to be the talk of the town. Once in a while, it's even in the supermarket. Thank you for the review.
Comment from Janie King
I didn't realized the had blue centers...theis is a very nice poem..short and sweet. I do love poppies and they have their special place in out hearts. God bless.
reply by the author on 29-May-2012
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I didn't realized the had blue centers...theis is a very nice poem..short and sweet. I do love poppies and they have their special place in out hearts. God bless.
Comment Written 29-May-2012
reply by the author on 29-May-2012
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I just researched it.... Thank you