The Red Dress
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "The Red Dress chapter forty-two"The story of a teenage girl
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Comment from wordsfromsue
Well, I will imagine the dashing face of Robert Downey Jr for Richard. I do hope she lives and I still hope they make Nick a jewel-less wonder and commit him to a leper colony for the rest of his days. And I truly mean no disrespect to lepers. Maybe fill his homes with bedbugs, fleas and leeches; he'd at least feel comfortable around like minded creatures.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2012
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Well, I will imagine the dashing face of Robert Downey Jr for Richard. I do hope she lives and I still hope they make Nick a jewel-less wonder and commit him to a leper colony for the rest of his days. And I truly mean no disrespect to lepers. Maybe fill his homes with bedbugs, fleas and leeches; he'd at least feel comfortable around like minded creatures.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2012
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I actually had a young Pierce Brosnan in mind, but I think it was the Porche that did it!Had a great laugh over your comments re bedbugs, fleas and leeches. I think I'm going to have to relaunch 'No such thing as a problem, just so I can look forward to your reviews! Alexis x
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Nahh, I'll read for two cents, unless you're genuinely trying to promote it. Your stuff's too much fun to care about money/member dollars. :-)
Comment from rwilliam
It didn't take a genius to work out that, with what she knew now, Lisa was in terrible danger.--OOPS I think you mean.. with what 'he' knew now...
He watched, his heart in his mouth, as the firemen sliced into his car with their cutting equipment, the sparks showing up clearly in the fading light like small sparklers.--LOVE this visual!!
EXCELLENT! Congratulations on the awards! You deserve them for sure!! BRAVO!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2012
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It didn't take a genius to work out that, with what she knew now, Lisa was in terrible danger.--OOPS I think you mean.. with what 'he' knew now...
He watched, his heart in his mouth, as the firemen sliced into his car with their cutting equipment, the sparks showing up clearly in the fading light like small sparklers.--LOVE this visual!!
EXCELLENT! Congratulations on the awards! You deserve them for sure!! BRAVO!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2012
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What awards? My son thought the 'sparkler' thing was cheesy when I read it out to him. (God forbid that he might actually read it himself) I'm so glad that you picked up on it. Thank you! Alexis x
Comment from rightforyou
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is a true sixer ****** (None Left)
Very well penned
This is extremely compelling and captivating. I have not kept up with the other chapters, but as for this one, it is wonderful! Your talent is admirable and stands out among the rest as one of the best
So emotional and one of those reads that you are chaffing at the bit wanting to read more...Well done and I will try and catch up on the rest of your work as well...Ron
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is a true sixer ****** (None Left)
Very well penned
This is extremely compelling and captivating. I have not kept up with the other chapters, but as for this one, it is wonderful! Your talent is admirable and stands out among the rest as one of the best
So emotional and one of those reads that you are chaffing at the bit wanting to read more...Well done and I will try and catch up on the rest of your work as well...Ron
Comment Written 16-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much, Ron. Your kind words of encouragement mean more to me than any six. Alexis x
Comment from c_lucas
It is the drunk and the insane who always survive their accidents. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
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It is the drunk and the insane who always survive their accidents. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
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So true, Charlie. Thank you so much for your review. Alexis x
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Yoou're welcome, Alexis. Charlie
Comment from angel123
Your story is very interesting so far. Nick is quite a character. I have not read your earlier chapters to understand why Lisa would ever have anything to do with him. I like Richard and I am glad Lisa met him. She will need someone strong to get her away from Nick. Nick has a secret and I can not wait to find out what it is.
Angel123
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
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Your story is very interesting so far. Nick is quite a character. I have not read your earlier chapters to understand why Lisa would ever have anything to do with him. I like Richard and I am glad Lisa met him. She will need someone strong to get her away from Nick. Nick has a secret and I can not wait to find out what it is.
Angel123
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
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Lisa turned to Nick because he was the only person who could get her away from her alcoholic, abusive mother (or so she thought!) As I said in one chapter, all she did was swop one controlling jailer for another. Thank you so much for your review, I really do appreciate it. Alexis x
Comment from cthomsen
Oh my gosh I hate Nick, and what is wrong with Lisa anyway - and can Richard save her from herself? (if she and her baby are still alive). This kept me engaged and anxious to read more! love it.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
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Oh my gosh I hate Nick, and what is wrong with Lisa anyway - and can Richard save her from herself? (if she and her baby are still alive). This kept me engaged and anxious to read more! love it.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much for your review. You and me both, I think Nick represents every heartless man I have ever come across (not that there have been many, I'm glad to say!) Alexis x
Comment from ArtisALivalor
This story was very enticing to me for very many reasons. It was emotional and intriguing... I wasnt bored for a second. Thanks for the good read.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
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This story was very enticing to me for very many reasons. It was emotional and intriguing... I wasnt bored for a second. Thanks for the good read.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the great review. It's always nice to get a new input, and really appreciated. Alexis
Comment from Anthony Crosbie
This is the first chapter I have read - I am definitely going to read more. You bring the characters to life and I could feel Lisa's fear and ultimately terror. This totally captured me and I could picture everything you wrote.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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This is the first chapter I have read - I am definitely going to read more. You bring the characters to life and I could feel Lisa's fear and ultimately terror. This totally captured me and I could picture everything you wrote.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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You couldn't pay me a greater compliment. Thank you so much for your review and encouragement. Alexis x
Comment from kenzi'spoems
i've been trying to keep up with these as much as i can and every time i read one, i am not disappointing! someday soon i will be able to go back and read them all at one time and fully understand this tale. Thank you for sharing this with me. I'm honored at the privilege to read it! blessings and hope in the future and now.
Forever and truly,
Kenzi
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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i've been trying to keep up with these as much as i can and every time i read one, i am not disappointing! someday soon i will be able to go back and read them all at one time and fully understand this tale. Thank you for sharing this with me. I'm honored at the privilege to read it! blessings and hope in the future and now.
Forever and truly,
Kenzi
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much, Kenzi! The honour is all mine. Thank you so much for your review and wonderful encouragement. Alexis x
Comment from dhee khaye
I'm at your chapter 42. Ten round of applause for this wonderful story, clear and clean. Narrated well, no confusing scenes, characters are in touch. I know that your writing with heart. Keep it up. God bless.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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I'm at your chapter 42. Ten round of applause for this wonderful story, clear and clean. Narrated well, no confusing scenes, characters are in touch. I know that your writing with heart. Keep it up. God bless.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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You have made my day with your wonderful review! Thank you so much for your encouragement and understanding. I'm just delighted that you are enjoying it. Alexis x