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Writingfundimension
I love this contest. Your entry is really cute and says a lot with the use of texting language. Good concept for the contest and I wish you luck with it.
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Scarlettdreams
Very cute. Good luck in the contest. I thought this was a very fun idea and you have done the prompt justice here. Well done. Bravo
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size17
Great work - glad to see it in the classified formatting. Although you could have kept it going in the heaven one (ie..clr bl skies) The names are great. The free AC/heat are clever notes.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2012
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good idea! fixed it! thank you size! :)
Comment from
wordsfromsue
Ooh, this is very good! Wickedly descriptive, clearly spelled out dwelling places. The basement apartment doesn't seem to have much to offer, unless you're crazy about heat! Take the penthouse. :-) Creative!
Brilliant write!
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