Let Children Show Us the Way
nonet contest17 total reviews
Comment from Writingfundimension
Wow, I can see why this won the contest, Connie. Bravo on a really lovely poem and a well-deserved win. I apparently missed this one somehow?! You've a real knack for this form, my friend. Love to see more of these from you. Warmest regards, Bev
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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Wow, I can see why this won the contest, Connie. Bravo on a really lovely poem and a well-deserved win. I apparently missed this one somehow?! You've a real knack for this form, my friend. Love to see more of these from you. Warmest regards, Bev
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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Thank you, my dear friend, for such a great review and for all the encouragement that you always seem to provide. You are indeed a very supportive fan! Lots of hugs to you. Connie :>)
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You're welcome and it's a real pleasure, my wonderful friend. Your poetry lights up my day! Love ya, Bev
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in excellent syllable count and structure for the nonet, and I just love the thoughtful message you deliver about tolerance and togetherness and how children seem to be born with it until society and their elders teach them otherwise :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Your poem is in excellent syllable count and structure for the nonet, and I just love the thoughtful message you deliver about tolerance and togetherness and how children seem to be born with it until society and their elders teach them otherwise :-) Brooke
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you, Brooke, for another lovely review. I don't know how you do it; you are so adept at responding to my reviews of your poetry by turning around and reviewing my most recent posts. Given how many fans you have, I can't imagine how you have the time to do this plus do the volunteering that I think you do at a homeless shelter. You are a remarkable poet and reviewer, my friend. Connie
Comment from rashi kumar
True! What a wonderful poem!
You have actually said that in this case children are better than adults, they are not biased. They will not think of the differences. I am glad to review this thoughtful poem.
All the best!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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True! What a wonderful poem!
You have actually said that in this case children are better than adults, they are not biased. They will not think of the differences. I am glad to review this thoughtful poem.
All the best!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for such a very thoughtful review. :>)
Comment from rchitwood
Thank you.ery good poem and children can always teach us.Your poem has good description of a child's insight.very smooth line flow and your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you.ery good poem and children can always teach us.Your poem has good description of a child's insight.very smooth line flow and your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much, Rita, for such a thoughtful review.
Comment from MissMerri
How perfect this is for Christmas time. Children can teach us so much, and do if we're listening. I loved this nonet, the wording, especially the thoughts and how beautifully and concisely they were expressed, and I thought the artwork was so appropriate. All of it is just right.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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How perfect this is for Christmas time. Children can teach us so much, and do if we're listening. I loved this nonet, the wording, especially the thoughts and how beautifully and concisely they were expressed, and I thought the artwork was so appropriate. All of it is just right.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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You are an angel, MissMerri! Thank you for such a lovely review and for giving this a six-star rating. It always means a lot to me when you like something I've written. :>)
Comment from seashellrees4
I like the message you present in your nonet. Children are innocent - we as adults teach them how to distrust and become prejudice. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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I like the message you present in your nonet. Children are innocent - we as adults teach them how to distrust and become prejudice. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for such a thoughtful review.
Comment from chita
You have good imagery and a good flow with your Nonet poem-I love your poem-children are the light of the world and it is mention in the Bible that they will be weaker but wiser--great job.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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You have good imagery and a good flow with your Nonet poem-I love your poem-children are the light of the world and it is mention in the Bible that they will be weaker but wiser--great job.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you, chita, for such a thoughtful review.
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture.. I love the poem. Let children lead the way. Bigotry is not born. It is taught. They can show us different. Great work.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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I love the picture.. I love the poem. Let children lead the way. Bigotry is not born. It is taught. They can show us different. Great work.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you, elliejean, for such a kind and thoughtful review. I'm glad you liked the picture. I've been holding onto it for awhile and have wanted to use it. Thanks again.
Comment from gazzagodbod
fantastic little poem the picture and presentation as rich and wonderful as the poem itself thank you so much and good luck gazzaxx
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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fantastic little poem the picture and presentation as rich and wonderful as the poem itself thank you so much and good luck gazzaxx
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you, gazza, for your thoughtful review and good luck wishes. :>)
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a nonet with a worthy message, well said. Form and syllable count are correct and the presentation is very artistic. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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This is a nonet with a worthy message, well said. Form and syllable count are correct and the presentation is very artistic. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you, Jeanie, for your very encouraging and thoughtful review.