Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from writerwish
Beautifully selected words here with a flow that is so smooth, I had to go back to see if it was the rhyming, which for me, it usually is. Such a positive message. I am emboldened.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011
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Beautifully selected words here with a flow that is so smooth, I had to go back to see if it was the rhyming, which for me, it usually is. Such a positive message. I am emboldened.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Jean Lutz
It is never too late. Sometimes true love comes after you have given up. I have a quiet weekend all to myself -- a rarity. I am torn between catching up on housework and reviewing. Trying to give both a bit of time.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011
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It is never too late. Sometimes true love comes after you have given up. I have a quiet weekend all to myself -- a rarity. I am torn between catching up on housework and reviewing. Trying to give both a bit of time.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011
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I've given up...but the dream lingers.
The housework will be there.
Enjoy your day.
Comment from Razz
All about
treasures of the lasting kind
and waking in an afterglow~
I wanna be
the kind of Gramma
that makes 'em blush
and say,
"Tell me again, Grammy...
the story of true love."
Another beauty.
So precious.
So full of life and honesty.
I love your photo's too...all of them.
Razz ><:>
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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All about
treasures of the lasting kind
and waking in an afterglow~
I wanna be
the kind of Gramma
that makes 'em blush
and say,
"Tell me again, Grammy...
the story of true love."
Another beauty.
So precious.
So full of life and honesty.
I love your photo's too...all of them.
Razz ><:>
Comment Written 16-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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thanks love!
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You're welcome, love.
Razz ><:>
Comment from pixiemillie
. . .and are you that 'daydream believer'? There is a hopefulness in this write- -hope for a better day, hope for a change in the heart, hope for grandchildren and hope those daydreams will become a reality.
Love the 'don't let go moments'- -so ee
Daydreaming is a good thing as long as it doesn't be just that. Reality is what we long for in those moments of 'never waver'.
The artwork- -awesome- -is it yours?
A moving post and 'until then'. . .I use a quote from your profile. . .
'Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion; it is not the expression of personality, but an escape from personality. But, of course, only those who have personality and emotions know what it means to want to escape from these things.'
T.S.Eliot
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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. . .and are you that 'daydream believer'? There is a hopefulness in this write- -hope for a better day, hope for a change in the heart, hope for grandchildren and hope those daydreams will become a reality.
Love the 'don't let go moments'- -so ee
Daydreaming is a good thing as long as it doesn't be just that. Reality is what we long for in those moments of 'never waver'.
The artwork- -awesome- -is it yours?
A moving post and 'until then'. . .I use a quote from your profile. . .
'Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion; it is not the expression of personality, but an escape from personality. But, of course, only those who have personality and emotions know what it means to want to escape from these things.'
T.S.Eliot
Comment Written 16-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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hopeful indeed. I have three grandkids. I just love 'em to pieces. Always thinking of the future....yesterday that just kinda flowed, not that great of a piece of poetry but I felt like expressing...
Comment from Graceheart
Now this is the JJ I know and have loved for so long! This is as genuine as a heart filled with love, as your own can blissfully pen! I am deeply moved by it as I am by all of your best. Your words make me believe in true love even when all else says otherwise...Loved it JJ and You.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Now this is the JJ I know and have loved for so long! This is as genuine as a heart filled with love, as your own can blissfully pen! I am deeply moved by it as I am by all of your best. Your words make me believe in true love even when all else says otherwise...Loved it JJ and You.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Thank you!... you do know me....
Comment from kiwigirl2821
I want to be the same kind of granny one day Jj but damn if I don't seem to make a mess of things. This is a gorgeous write full of great emotive bliss...loved it. Bravo. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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I want to be the same kind of granny one day Jj but damn if I don't seem to make a mess of things. This is a gorgeous write full of great emotive bliss...loved it. Bravo. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 16-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Thank you!
Comment from G.B. Smith
Sweetie, this is so true to life for my part. I have a hard time distinguishing between day dreams and night mares. I would like my day dreams to be my reality I must confess. Nicely thought out Jewell
Bear
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Sweetie, this is so true to life for my part. I have a hard time distinguishing between day dreams and night mares. I would like my day dreams to be my reality I must confess. Nicely thought out Jewell
Bear
Comment Written 16-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Thank you! :-)
Comment from ernesto escarro
Day Dreams Linger
Untold story find its time for telling
on time of fresh memory inviting you to share happiness with grand kids. And so this poem is well written
to materialize the eagerness of having day dreams
reached to the young.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Day Dreams Linger
Untold story find its time for telling
on time of fresh memory inviting you to share happiness with grand kids. And so this poem is well written
to materialize the eagerness of having day dreams
reached to the young.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Thank you!
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Welcome. God bless.
Comment from HAWordsmith
This is a nicely written 'sigh'. I call writing like this a sigh because I have no other word for it. It is a thought you have in quiet moments so of repose, a daydream, if you will, pondering things that you believe would make your life more complete, things you may want. I liked "I wanna be
the kind of Gramma that makes 'em blush" - a great picture you paint here. Thank you for this posting and many blessings.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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This is a nicely written 'sigh'. I call writing like this a sigh because I have no other word for it. It is a thought you have in quiet moments so of repose, a daydream, if you will, pondering things that you believe would make your life more complete, things you may want. I liked "I wanna be
the kind of Gramma that makes 'em blush" - a great picture you paint here. Thank you for this posting and many blessings.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Thank you!