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Waterfall

The motion of a spiritual waterfall!

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Comment from honeydo51
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Hi there Katielaconocedor16!

That was certainly a nice little Haiku and it painted a lovely picture of a waterfall. The right amount of syllables too. Really great job!

honeydo51

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2011

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Comment from WilliamDeen
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Rushing past//Rushing passed

OH a waterfall! How beautiful they are with their strong rushing water passed stones. Your poem has good form of 5-7-5 syllables.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2011

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