Me and You 40+ years of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Like a Rose"Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez
9 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This poem is a tribute to what must be a wonderful wife. Nice use of metaphor. You might want to consider breaking your 1st 2 lines at the rhyme for consistency. See what you think? Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2011
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This poem is a tribute to what must be a wonderful wife. Nice use of metaphor. You might want to consider breaking your 1st 2 lines at the rhyme for consistency. See what you think? Debbie
Comment Written 03-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the review
Comment from Piggies Grandma
This is a very lovely poem you have written for your wife, gmartinez. I'm sure she thought it was lovely. It is very cleverly written and very well thought out.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2011
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This is a very lovely poem you have written for your wife, gmartinez. I'm sure she thought it was lovely. It is very cleverly written and very well thought out.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2011
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Thank you very much - she does like it
Comment from rchitwood
Very romantic and a great tribute to your wife. I will be married 43 years this August and I would marry him all over again. Nothing is as beautiful as finding your one true love. Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2011
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Very romantic and a great tribute to your wife. I will be married 43 years this August and I would marry him all over again. Nothing is as beautiful as finding your one true love. Blessings Rita
Comment Written 01-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2011
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thank you and Congradulations - we are going on 31 yrs married
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Well this poem should keep her smiling for a while...
No need to worry about her last nerve.
I thought this was soooo romantic....
But then I am a romantic fool...
Way to go, loved it......
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2011
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Well this poem should keep her smiling for a while...
No need to worry about her last nerve.
I thought this was soooo romantic....
But then I am a romantic fool...
Way to go, loved it......
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 01-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind words of encouragement
Comment from nancyjam
It is so nice that you write this
for your wife. the simile of the rose
works so well. roses are beautiful and sweet,
but thorns can hurt. realistic evaluation of a
woman. i hope she liked it.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2011
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It is so nice that you write this
for your wife. the simile of the rose
works so well. roses are beautiful and sweet,
but thorns can hurt. realistic evaluation of a
woman. i hope she liked it.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the review.
Comment from iwroteit
I like your comparison of the hard side of a person and the soft side. The beauty of nature and someone you love mixes nicely. You obviously adore your wife, it comes out comfortable throughout the poem. Do watch for mis-spelled words, especially in such a short piece-- it should be petals.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2011
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I like your comparison of the hard side of a person and the soft side. The beauty of nature and someone you love mixes nicely. You obviously adore your wife, it comes out comfortable throughout the poem. Do watch for mis-spelled words, especially in such a short piece-- it should be petals.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2011
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Thank you
Comment from judiverse
Lovely photo, and I loved the poem. We think of love as being "like a red, red rose but you added some new angles to your poem. "Tongue as sharp as a thorn is a good example. I'm sure Angela loved the poem. Good work. judiverse
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2011
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Lovely photo, and I loved the poem. We think of love as being "like a red, red rose but you added some new angles to your poem. "Tongue as sharp as a thorn is a good example. I'm sure Angela loved the poem. Good work. judiverse
Comment Written 01-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the review
Comment from MizKat
George - Your poem for your wife is very nice. I'll bet she was thrilled to have you write a poem for her. Kat
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2011
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George - Your poem for your wife is very nice. I'll bet she was thrilled to have you write a poem for her. Kat
Comment Written 01-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2011
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Thank you she is my gardian Angel
Comment from mumsyone
Your poem is a nice tribute to your wife and your love for her. the rose, with soft petals and sharp thorns, is a good comparison to what a woman can be like.
pedals (petals) so sensual and sweet
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2011
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Your poem is a nice tribute to your wife and your love for her. the rose, with soft petals and sharp thorns, is a good comparison to what a woman can be like.
pedals (petals) so sensual and sweet
Comment Written 01-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2011
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Thank you - women are beautiful and danagerous at the same time - LOL