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Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "haiku"keep your hope alive....
8 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rose
Well written piece that effectively describes the life and transformation of a caterpillar in such few words. Keep up the great work.
Rose
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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Well written piece that effectively describes the life and transformation of a caterpillar in such few words. Keep up the great work.
Rose
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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thank you rose :)
Comment from MAMONIA
Congratulations on your win. I knew
this was you when I voted. It says
I didn't, but I did.
I remembered this from a class and it
is still adorable.
Lots of love to you and good luck.
Your friends, Marie
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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Congratulations on your win. I knew
this was you when I voted. It says
I didn't, but I did.
I remembered this from a class and it
is still adorable.
Lots of love to you and good luck.
Your friends, Marie
Comment Written 20-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011
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lol thanx lots! :)
Comment from Sasha
I love this new writing challenge. This is a marvelous entry and as always put a smile on my face. Here goes my broken record but I have to say, you are a talented poet and I enjoy your work immensely.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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I love this new writing challenge. This is a marvelous entry and as always put a smile on my face. Here goes my broken record but I have to say, you are a talented poet and I enjoy your work immensely.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011
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thank you lots! :)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Yes, yes, shelley your haiku is definably cute
Smart caterpillar snuggle up in a tight blanket and keep warm until you turn into a gorgeous butterfly
Gert
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011
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Yes, yes, shelley your haiku is definably cute
Smart caterpillar snuggle up in a tight blanket and keep warm until you turn into a gorgeous butterfly
Gert
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011
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thank you gert :)
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
howdy shells,
sorry i've not been around much. i miss ya! and i don't know if i've ever thanked you for your introducing me to blitz poetry, so thank you. it's the cure for so called "writer's block."
love,
pen
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011
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howdy shells,
sorry i've not been around much. i miss ya! and i don't know if i've ever thanked you for your introducing me to blitz poetry, so thank you. it's the cure for so called "writer's block."
love,
pen
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011
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LOL! thanx pea! welcome back! :)
Comment from Mari_
Nice classic haiku for the contest but what is the name of the poem, haiku? What about Butterfly or Caterpillar?
You're right tired is one of those weird words we say in two syllables but it is one.
Too bad you couldn't make the wakes into 'awake'. It would sound better and be a better choice. Awakes means to cease sleeping.
Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011
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Nice classic haiku for the contest but what is the name of the poem, haiku? What about Butterfly or Caterpillar?
You're right tired is one of those weird words we say in two syllables but it is one.
Too bad you couldn't make the wakes into 'awake'. It would sound better and be a better choice. Awakes means to cease sleeping.
Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011
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hmm will see what i can do! thanx mari! :)
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Loved butterflies. This is very nicely done.
Think it will do well in the contest.
I am so glad you shared this...I used to see myself as the caterpillar morphing into the butterfly as I changed with disease to a new me..so this hits home for me..
Thank you for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011
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Loved butterflies. This is very nicely done.
Think it will do well in the contest.
I am so glad you shared this...I used to see myself as the caterpillar morphing into the butterfly as I changed with disease to a new me..so this hits home for me..
Thank you for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011
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thank you maureen :)
Comment from bhogg
Hi Shelly - I enjoyed. If it is supposed to be a classic, some of the purists aren't going to like the centering and the cute blinking icon. For me, it worked great! Bill
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011
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Hi Shelly - I enjoyed. If it is supposed to be a classic, some of the purists aren't going to like the centering and the cute blinking icon. For me, it worked great! Bill
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2011
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LOL! thanx bill! :)