Comment from samsaysagain

Excellent

Excellent. A nice 5-7-5 with perfect syllable count in each line. Not quite sure why the Mohammed Monifi is there so rating was given strictly on the 5-7-5. Wish there had been a suitable picture to add emphasis to the having fun! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-May-2011

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reply by the author on 15-May-2011

Thanks a lot for your comment

reply by samsaysagain on 15-May-2011

Thanks for the reply. Good luck.

reply by the author on 31-May-2011

When will Fanftory declare the names of winners in Free Haiku Contest ?

reply by samsaysagain on 03-Jun-2011

Sorry, I have no idea. I have nothing to do with that. Good luck.

Comment from The Stranger

Excellent

I like the short but pleasant message but I think it could be even shorter and flow better if you remove "shining"

"Singing with the birds
Smiling with the sun:
No sorrow but fun"

What do you think?

 Comment Written 15-May-2011

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reply by the author on 15-May-2011

Thanks a lot.I know but the 5-7-5 poetry contest requires that.
If I dropped " shining" , the number of syllables will be 5 not 7
What do you think now?

reply by The Stranger on 15-May-2011

Ah, I wasnt aware of the rules, no my friend, its just fine given the guidelines

reply by the author on 31-May-2011

When will Fanftory declare the names of winners in Free Haiku Contest ?

Comment from Carol Johnson

Excellent

Very nice. Reading this poem I thought the last line pulled it all together. The beautiful day and the sound of the birds brought this person into better spirits. Wonderful job with such a short poem to convey such feeling. Excellent!

 Comment Written 15-May-2011

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reply by the author on 15-May-2011

Thanks a lot