Easter Bunny Pirate
Nonet Poetry4 total reviews
Comment from DIS-illusioned
--LOL! Cute picture image.
--Creative and witty one here.
--Wouldn't want that loony pirate bunny hanging out with my kids--very bad influence. lol!
--No glaring grammar issues.
--Met all the nonet poem requirements--line structure and syllable counts.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2011
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--LOL! Cute picture image.
--Creative and witty one here.
--Wouldn't want that loony pirate bunny hanging out with my kids--very bad influence. lol!
--No glaring grammar issues.
--Met all the nonet poem requirements--line structure and syllable counts.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2011
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You're super nice. Thanks so much. Good night!
Comment from Toireasa
I'm not really certain what to make of this. I'm just a wee bit nonplussed by it. The structure is perfect, I "get" the sexual reference in lines 3 & 4, but the rest leaves me bewildered, befuddled and bemused.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2011
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I'm not really certain what to make of this. I'm just a wee bit nonplussed by it. The structure is perfect, I "get" the sexual reference in lines 3 & 4, but the rest leaves me bewildered, befuddled and bemused.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2011
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Just learned a new style, Nonet. My poetry is exceptional at free verse and haiku (when I actually put my heart into it). So FanStory assists me in learning new styles. They seem much simpler, but the audience gives mixed reviews. You turned repetitive on me. The style Nonet does not tell stories so well. But here is the basis of poem.
Line 1,2 & 3... No agreement to the holidays, but still has fun with it for he's a bunny pirate who sneak his alcohol via carrots
Lines 4 & 5 Sex is his fun but he's a sinner on the run
Line 6 common outburst towards rivals
Lines 7,8 & 9.... a rascal surprised by money
Hope you enjoy it now.
Comment from Krista Stovall
I didn't like this piece at all. Not my taste. It's not bad and the technical aspects are fine, I just have a different set of styles and forms that I prefer
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2011
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I didn't like this piece at all. Not my taste. It's not bad and the technical aspects are fine, I just have a different set of styles and forms that I prefer
Comment Written 23-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2011
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Learned Nonet Poetry today. Not sure how I feel about it. Wanted to expand my horizons. Happy Easter!
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in excellent syllable count and structure for the nonet until you get to the final line, which is two syllables instead of one.
boot/y
I like the alliterative bucktoothed bunny/blimey/booty
and I like the four syllable line - fee-fi-fo-fum - a fun entry in the nonet contest - just change that final line. Brooke
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2011
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Your poem is in excellent syllable count and structure for the nonet until you get to the final line, which is two syllables instead of one.
boot/y
I like the alliterative bucktoothed bunny/blimey/booty
and I like the four syllable line - fee-fi-fo-fum - a fun entry in the nonet contest - just change that final line. Brooke
Comment Written 23-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2011
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Thanks so much. You're nice. The last word will be changed to 'loot'.