Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from bard owl
And when your "love can love no more" you will be in the abiding presence of the Author of Love. This is so beautiful. It speaks of the finer aspects of the mortal spirit while not ignoring the fact that lesser aspects exist, in need of help you are willing to give. This HAS to have six stars. What an iinspiring write. Blessings, Linda
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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And when your "love can love no more" you will be in the abiding presence of the Author of Love. This is so beautiful. It speaks of the finer aspects of the mortal spirit while not ignoring the fact that lesser aspects exist, in need of help you are willing to give. This HAS to have six stars. What an iinspiring write. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Linda, What a blessing it is to get this message and all those stars from one of my favorite poets here. Thank you. I was beginning to think people weren't seeing the deeper place this derived from! Hugz....jj
Comment from adewpearl
Jewell, this is most expressive as you go through limbs, voice, feet, hands,eyes, ears, mind, heart, spirit - and how each one will one day break down and cease to function - but love outlasts them all - when limbs no longer bend, voice no longer sings, feet grow weak... This is an excellent example of how the structure/composition of a poem can so enhance the message. Brooke
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Jewell, this is most expressive as you go through limbs, voice, feet, hands,eyes, ears, mind, heart, spirit - and how each one will one day break down and cease to function - but love outlasts them all - when limbs no longer bend, voice no longer sings, feet grow weak... This is an excellent example of how the structure/composition of a poem can so enhance the message. Brooke
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Thanks Brooke. I hope it touched you.
Comment from Hitcher
This is a fantastic, beautifully crafted poem Jewell, your poem tells of a soul who intends to live their life to the full, one who will put others before themselves, touch taste and tolerate all life has to offer, be it good or bad. One who will walk hand in hand with God and give all they can to honor Him. Powerful poem friend, very powerful!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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This is a fantastic, beautifully crafted poem Jewell, your poem tells of a soul who intends to live their life to the full, one who will put others before themselves, touch taste and tolerate all life has to offer, be it good or bad. One who will walk hand in hand with God and give all they can to honor Him. Powerful poem friend, very powerful!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Thank you Hitcher!
I really appreciate you stopping in. Your review touched my heart.
Comment from Diny
THis dear one was so touching and so wonderful you have written with that hand a mighty testiment of love-With that spirit you have expressed the saddness of elderly and the hope of us all that we do make a difference= Knowthis that you my dear one indeed do-hugs - a priceless piece- Di
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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THis dear one was so touching and so wonderful you have written with that hand a mighty testiment of love-With that spirit you have expressed the saddness of elderly and the hope of us all that we do make a difference= Knowthis that you my dear one indeed do-hugs - a priceless piece- Di
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Aww! Thanks so much, sweet friend! Appreciate it!
Comment from G.B. Smith
Not until my love
can love
no more.
One day....
Jewell this is supreme. I have followed you work for quite some time, and this new feeling you are exuding is wonderful. Your thoughts and muse are much cleaner and precise. Lovely, just as are you
Bear
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Not until my love
can love
no more.
One day....
Jewell this is supreme. I have followed you work for quite some time, and this new feeling you are exuding is wonderful. Your thoughts and muse are much cleaner and precise. Lovely, just as are you
Bear
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Thanks Bear! Life is definitely anew.:)
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Then that will be a long long time. It is so good to see you back writing again. You were missed Lady
Bear
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What will be a long time?
Comment from Helvi2
My friend, As long as people read your poetry your song will always be sung. You will touch peoples hearts, surround them with hugs and they will always feel your love. You will still have the power to soothe. Your spirit lives in rhe words you write. I LOVE the words written here.
You're a wonderful poet my friend and written words have a way of living on. Wish I had a six to give you!
LOve you and your writing! :o)
Helvi
I still feel the same way I did when I first reviewed this. Words like this touch all who read it. An incredible poet like you never dies for the feelings within your poems will continually reach out. When you think about it that's a pretty amazing gift. I feel SO lucky to be able to read your words. You write far beyond the mere words I write. The songs of your poems have a lovely melody that will last forever.
Love your writing BIG time!
Hugs a plenty! :o)
Helvi
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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My friend, As long as people read your poetry your song will always be sung. You will touch peoples hearts, surround them with hugs and they will always feel your love. You will still have the power to soothe. Your spirit lives in rhe words you write. I LOVE the words written here.
You're a wonderful poet my friend and written words have a way of living on. Wish I had a six to give you!
LOve you and your writing! :o)
Helvi
I still feel the same way I did when I first reviewed this. Words like this touch all who read it. An incredible poet like you never dies for the feelings within your poems will continually reach out. When you think about it that's a pretty amazing gift. I feel SO lucky to be able to read your words. You write far beyond the mere words I write. The songs of your poems have a lovely melody that will last forever.
Love your writing BIG time!
Hugs a plenty! :o)
Helvi
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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Helvi!! Have missed you. Thanks sweet one!
Comment from MENNIPLOSS
A BEAUTIFUL AND BEAUTIFUL POEM, COMPOSED BY REAL VERSES AND IN HARMONY. HE IS BEAUTIFUL AND THERE IS WORDS OF LOVE AND A DEEP REALITY. I LIKE TO READ IT. CONGRATULATIONS. A SUPERB POEM.
MENNIPLOSS
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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A BEAUTIFUL AND BEAUTIFUL POEM, COMPOSED BY REAL VERSES AND IN HARMONY. HE IS BEAUTIFUL AND THERE IS WORDS OF LOVE AND A DEEP REALITY. I LIKE TO READ IT. CONGRATULATIONS. A SUPERB POEM.
MENNIPLOSS
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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Thank you!
Comment from nancyjam
A beautiful poem contemplating
the end of your time on earth but
not before you accomplish all you were
meant to do - what we are all meant to do -
therefore your poem becomes universal in meaning.
Thank you for the reminder.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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A beautiful poem contemplating
the end of your time on earth but
not before you accomplish all you were
meant to do - what we are all meant to do -
therefore your poem becomes universal in meaning.
Thank you for the reminder.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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You got it dear. Thanks
Comment from wholechild
You capture a full and purposeful life in this beautiful poem. I like how you focus on each part of your body and are able to describe all the beauty and meaning that can be created through that part of you. Even though it talks about a day when that will be no more, it is an inspiring message about how to live a full life.
Shannon
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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You capture a full and purposeful life in this beautiful poem. I like how you focus on each part of your body and are able to describe all the beauty and meaning that can be created through that part of you. Even though it talks about a day when that will be no more, it is an inspiring message about how to live a full life.
Shannon
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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Thank yoy Shannon
Comment from Gary D. Hardy
A very touching and thought provoking piece of writing.
Just seems to flow smoothly down the screen. Making for an easy and enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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A very touching and thought provoking piece of writing.
Just seems to flow smoothly down the screen. Making for an easy and enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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Thanks Joe
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My Pleasure!!!
