Comment from Larry5000

Excellent

Well I can imagine you do love being Grammy for sure. A great little poem about your Grandchild for sure, and even tho you was at a lost for words as you say, it seems what you did say was all that was needed. Very good job indeed.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2011

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011

Thank you

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

There will be a small miracle arriving any day now for the young couple that I am nanny for. Pray that all goes well as she arrives. Mom, dad, big brother and all. Your own miracle is a darling.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2011

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2011

I will pray, Jean. So glad you stopped by!

Comment from KathyH

Excellent

This is beautiful. Pictured every one of my baby grandchildren. I think even more that my kids. Specially liked " you have taken my breath away". Perfectly captures the feeling

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2011

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2011

Thanks Kathy

Comment from words

Excellent

I love this one.


So sweet and tender and true.

I especially loved:Your existence-
Potential beyond words
Proof that life
is cyclic
Love is everlasting

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2011

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011

Thanks!

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Sigh is right!!! What a beautiful little guy, Braden Lane. That name is just perfect and really individualizes him. Girl I love you being a grandma too!!!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2011

Me tooo!! :))

reply by Gungalo on 18-Mar-2011

Fun eh? Enjoy it girl, they grow too quickly. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

Comment from Diny

Excellent

Awwwwwwwe! those are kissable lil cheeks1 You are indeed blessed!- and that Braden is a lucky lil guy to have you as a grammy too! great words- you are rarely for a lack in them that's for sure! LOVELY and adorable- hugs- I am very jealous!- Di

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2011

Is he cute or WHAT??? :))

Comment from missy98writer

Excellent

VisonaryPoet777,
what a delightful poem. You did an excellent job writing this. Adorable art work and visual presentation. I enjoyed the lines: "There's something about you eyes, your smile, your hands.... You have take my breath away I can only sigh." Babies are awesome. I never got to have my own because of fibroid cancer, but I had to help raise my eight year old Nephew when my little sister at the age of 29 died after a boched gastric bypass. I help raised my nephew since he was born. Kids are precious. Keep on writing poetic hits.
Melissa.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2011

Thank you. He's so precious

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

awe, that is so cute and so sweet, children are adorable and i am happy for you being a loving grandmother, i am sure your son and daughter were happy with this poem.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2011

They haven't seen it yet. Lol
I just had to share the love! :)

Comment from Laurie Clayton

Excellent

You write of being a Granny,

But your words also define being

a new Mum...you paint my own emotions

I wonder how I could have denied

Myself this gift for so long.

Simply beautiful.

S

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2011

:) thanks sweet Laurie!
He's so beautiful.

Comment from lola29

Excellent

Oh, what a beautiful baby. No wonder you are newly in love. Your describe your feelings so beautifully, and I love the word you used, 'sigh.'

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 Comment Written 18-Mar-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2011

:) sighhhhh