Moonlight And You
That Magical Moment9 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
I love the closing rhyme and the sensory details that add to the quiet, serene, tender mood of this lovely romantic piece - the tender sighing, the silent moonbeams, the dance in the quiet. :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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I love the closing rhyme and the sensory details that add to the quiet, serene, tender mood of this lovely romantic piece - the tender sighing, the silent moonbeams, the dance in the quiet. :-) Brooke
Comment Written 21-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2011
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As always, thank you for stopping by and for a wonderful review.
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi fasdigits
Very nice poem, your whole poem was filled with romance.
I love your first line--
A smile without words
Drop by when you get a chance.
Gert
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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Hi fasdigits
Very nice poem, your whole poem was filled with romance.
I love your first line--
A smile without words
Drop by when you get a chance.
Gert
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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As always, thank you for stopping by and for your gracious review.
I will drop by your site over the weekend.
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You are so welcome
Gert
Comment from kiwigirl2821
This one is definitely romantic and beautiful with good descriptive words and flow ... has a great movement to it.
I would only offer to this wonderful verse that you contemplate a different word than "caress" in your 3rd line 1st stanza ... perhaps "brush" might do it and put the reader smack dab in the middle of that kiss!
"A (brush) of soft lips
Gently caressing a kiss"
xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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This one is definitely romantic and beautiful with good descriptive words and flow ... has a great movement to it.
I would only offer to this wonderful verse that you contemplate a different word than "caress" in your 3rd line 1st stanza ... perhaps "brush" might do it and put the reader smack dab in the middle of that kiss!
"A (brush) of soft lips
Gently caressing a kiss"
xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
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thank you for stopping by and for your gracious review. Your thoughts on using brush instead of caressing, excellent, much softer, more intimate.
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Comment from mbenede1
Nice picture of love and nature working together - a pure kiss binding two souls. absolutely beautiful, thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
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Nice picture of love and nature working together - a pure kiss binding two souls. absolutely beautiful, thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hello fast, I enjoyed reading this poem. It made me smile. I particularly liked the following:
A smile without words
A linking of hearts
(the magical moment when two become one)
Great artwork ... where do you get your photos? They are always quite good.
A beautiful love poem. Regards, LateBloomer
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
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Hello fast, I enjoyed reading this poem. It made me smile. I particularly liked the following:
A smile without words
A linking of hearts
(the magical moment when two become one)
Great artwork ... where do you get your photos? They are always quite good.
A beautiful love poem. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
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As always, nice of you to stop by and for your wonderful review.
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What I do is write my poem and then search the internet or perhaps my own photos to try to merge them with the words.
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Comment from Magics02
What a beautiful poem and a wonderful picture. Did you take this yourself or someone else. It is an amazing picture and you fit the words in here ever so gently. Just love this one
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
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What a beautiful poem and a wonderful picture. Did you take this yourself or someone else. It is an amazing picture and you fit the words in here ever so gently. Just love this one
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
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You are so welcome writer
Comment from nancyjam
I like the imagery in your
lovely free verse which creates
a romantic mood.
"soft shadows, sighing of the winds"
are beautiful lines.
A pleasure to read this one.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
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I like the imagery in your
lovely free verse which creates
a romantic mood.
"soft shadows, sighing of the winds"
are beautiful lines.
A pleasure to read this one.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
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Comment from prodigal
Very nice and loving feelings permeate this well written poem. I like the use of shorter lines such as silent moonbeams and lovers entwined. they add an element of thoughtfulness to the poem and are a very nice touch. well done- sam
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
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Very nice and loving feelings permeate this well written poem. I like the use of shorter lines such as silent moonbeams and lovers entwined. they add an element of thoughtfulness to the poem and are a very nice touch. well done- sam
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
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Comment from l.raven
This is very nicely written.I like the wording in this poem.This reminds me of the beach in Florida .My husband and I would walk along to beach.There was a concrete wall and we would sit on it and kiss through the night.Your picture is perfect
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
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This is very nicely written.I like the wording in this poem.This reminds me of the beach in Florida .My husband and I would walk along to beach.There was a concrete wall and we would sit on it and kiss through the night.Your picture is perfect
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
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