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keep your hope alive....

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Comment from LateBloomer
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Hello Shelley,

Simple, direct, to the point and to the heart.

Good luck in the contest. Keep writing.

Regards, LateBloomer

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2009

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
    thankya :)
Comment from fionageorge
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Oh Shelley, this is short, meaningful and gives a true picture of our mission in life. I loved your ending, it was funny, but true.
Good luck in the contest.
Warm Regards
Marijke

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2009

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2009
    hehe thanx lots! :)
Comment from Alexander E Poet
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short and sweet,I like the imagery Great job with this piece . Good insights, nice poetic flow. I look forward to your next one Alexander QQ.... ..


 Comment Written 13-Oct-2009

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2009
    thank you much :)
Comment from Maria C.
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I think the message is clear, and it is a must. We do need to treat each other with respect and love always. I don't know what style of poetry this is though. Let me know.
Maria

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2009

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2009
    eh just a short little freeflowingfreeverse lol :)
reply by Maria C. on 14-Oct-2009
    Thanks for your response. I am new at all this and am learning the names for different styles of poetry. Best of luck in the contest.
    Maria
Comment from babylonia
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shelley,
i have no questions but there are probably others that do. they might not get that one. made me smile. short and sweet and to the point.
good luck~
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2009

reply by the author on 11-Oct-2009
    lol thanx lots! :)
reply by babylonia on 11-Oct-2009
    you are welcome~
Comment from Lainee...
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Lol...Hi Shelley...I'm still smiling at this one! Very cleverly written in perfect freestyle form with minimum word usage giving ultimate impact and a light-hearted, yet unsure question to finish.

Love this! Lainee :O)


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2009

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2009
    hehe thank you much! :-)
Comment from Gert sherwood
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No shelley,
there aren't any questions.
you have made it clear.
Just hope the whole World realizes it
what you said and do it

Gert

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2009

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2009
    lol if only huh? :)
Comment from misscookie
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Hi I got your message Long and strong.
I always told my childre, granchildren now great grands "Keep it simple" I love it dont change a thing is that simple enough(smile)

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2009

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2009
    thank you so much! :)
Comment from Sasha
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I like this very much. Short, sweet, and to the point. I agree too. Were we all to treat every living thing with love and respect the world we live in would become a completely different place. Great entry for the contest too.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2009

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2009
    so true! :-)