Lessons From My Species
Things I learned from28 total reviews
Comment from Xylok
I especially enjoyed number 2, 4, #5 for the necessitation of something divine or metaphysical it implies; #8 for the direction it suggests we must take in addition to religion to invoke world peace, #20 because the overly competetive world could probably benefit from less importance being placed on winning or beating others, and of course #23 because tolerance is sorely lacking globally as a consequence of exactly the point you bring up. samstone had a cool prompt. i have a contest going right now too if you are interested. its a writing prompt called Funny Answering Machine Message. I think there are still a few spots open though i havent checked since last night before settling in when there were seven spots left; entry fee is one member dollar.
Excellent points you make; not to mention some are funny. but the reason mostly culpable for my liking it is the fact that it is so morally profound. a poem like this would do well to spread like a voracious contagion across the earth so that others could learn the lessons you learned from other others :) great write; i adore your mind.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2009
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I especially enjoyed number 2, 4, #5 for the necessitation of something divine or metaphysical it implies; #8 for the direction it suggests we must take in addition to religion to invoke world peace, #20 because the overly competetive world could probably benefit from less importance being placed on winning or beating others, and of course #23 because tolerance is sorely lacking globally as a consequence of exactly the point you bring up. samstone had a cool prompt. i have a contest going right now too if you are interested. its a writing prompt called Funny Answering Machine Message. I think there are still a few spots open though i havent checked since last night before settling in when there were seven spots left; entry fee is one member dollar.
Excellent points you make; not to mention some are funny. but the reason mostly culpable for my liking it is the fact that it is so morally profound. a poem like this would do well to spread like a voracious contagion across the earth so that others could learn the lessons you learned from other others :) great write; i adore your mind.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2009
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Xylok, once again thank you so very much!!!!!!!! You have just made my spirits soar with such an awesome and in depth review. I adore your mind too!! Once again I apologize for just getting back to you. jlsavell
Comment from docpetec
So I see you are a philosopher too. You are very astute and observant. I especially like #22. It is so "subtle." I don't know if this is in the spirit of what you are trying to say but how's this: IN CHOICE RESIDES BOTH HEAVEN AND HELL. ITIS HEAVEN THAT WE CAN CHOOSE AND HELL WHEN WE HAVE TO."
I will try and add to this wonderful list, Jimi
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2009
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So I see you are a philosopher too. You are very astute and observant. I especially like #22. It is so "subtle." I don't know if this is in the spirit of what you are trying to say but how's this: IN CHOICE RESIDES BOTH HEAVEN AND HELL. ITIS HEAVEN THAT WE CAN CHOOSE AND HELL WHEN WE HAVE TO."
I will try and add to this wonderful list, Jimi
Comment Written 12-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2009
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Peter, now what did I do to deserve this??? Thank you so much for taking your time to read and review my observation of mankind..interesting take.you are quite astute..yes add to it..it will be fun.once again thank you so much...jimi
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
A very marvelous Monday evening to you! Wow, did you take up the challenge and give your readers a lot, whole lot to ponder over. I enjoy these insights and opinions, great piece! Loyd
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2009
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A very marvelous Monday evening to you! Wow, did you take up the challenge and give your readers a lot, whole lot to ponder over. I enjoy these insights and opinions, great piece! Loyd
Comment Written 31-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2009
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Loyd Taylor, my friend, you know I could have kept on and on, for you know how verbose I can certainly be..thak you for your loyal support of my work..jimi
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You are welcome and great too!
Comment from Judian James
I love a smart write and an obviously smart writer ... not one who hits it once in awhile with a bit of luck. You are one of the writers on my "smart list". You never disappoint and your intelligence shines through with each piece you write. This was great!!!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2009
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I love a smart write and an obviously smart writer ... not one who hits it once in awhile with a bit of luck. You are one of the writers on my "smart list". You never disappoint and your intelligence shines through with each piece you write. This was great!!!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2009
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Judian James, once again I am so humbled by your wonderful review and compliment. May I always stay smart. Sometimes I wonder about me though..again thank you so very much..jlsavell
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Yes, may you always stay smart ... I count on it!!
Comment from Nicky B
So many good ones here.
These particularly.
22. A man who loves to stir a lot of crap, likes the smell.
23. Man's understanding of a closed mind is someone who does not think like himself.
And this one.
11. A man who has lost his vision has smothered his dreams.
Thanks for giving me a lot to think about.
Take care. Nick.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2009
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So many good ones here.
These particularly.
22. A man who loves to stir a lot of crap, likes the smell.
23. Man's understanding of a closed mind is someone who does not think like himself.
And this one.
11. A man who has lost his vision has smothered his dreams.
Thanks for giving me a lot to think about.
Take care. Nick.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2009
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Nicky B, thank you so very much for stopping by to read my work. You are appreciated..jlsavell
Comment from Hitcher
This contest was tailor made for you Jimi, you got a chance to use you gift of the given word, to dazzle the reader while he ponders the list you have offered up, there are a few gems; number 9,11, 14[loved this one]and number 22[classic]. This is a excellent contest offering Jimi, I think it will do very well, good luck!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2009
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This contest was tailor made for you Jimi, you got a chance to use you gift of the given word, to dazzle the reader while he ponders the list you have offered up, there are a few gems; number 9,11, 14[loved this one]and number 22[classic]. This is a excellent contest offering Jimi, I think it will do very well, good luck!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2009
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Hitcher, you flatter me. In all humbleness my gift is no better than yours, my friend. You sir can write like fire. Again thank you so very much. I appreciate you so so very much..jimi
Comment from DreamWriter1212
You also are a gifted writer and a vast vocabulary!
Your verbiage strengthens your piece and gives it a higher prestige.
You could publish this piece in a magazine.
I found your perspective on the issues were truthful, and had a lot of emotion. Indeed, you have lived and had experiences to make you have the perspectives that you do.
Bullet Number 2: Had me stumped on two words. Thank you for encouraging me to look it up.
I enjoyed the reference to "sick-care".
Good luck in contest. DreamWriter1212
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2009
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You also are a gifted writer and a vast vocabulary!
Your verbiage strengthens your piece and gives it a higher prestige.
You could publish this piece in a magazine.
I found your perspective on the issues were truthful, and had a lot of emotion. Indeed, you have lived and had experiences to make you have the perspectives that you do.
Bullet Number 2: Had me stumped on two words. Thank you for encouraging me to look it up.
I enjoyed the reference to "sick-care".
Good luck in contest. DreamWriter1212
Comment Written 30-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2009
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DreamWriter1212, thank you so very much for such a wonderful review and compliment. jlsavell
Comment from sgalletti
Fabulous list! Almost like a rant - and, a worthy one at that. I especially liked #21. Just reviewing all the entries before voting. There are some excellent lists. Your is one. Best of luck! Sue
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2009
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Fabulous list! Almost like a rant - and, a worthy one at that. I especially liked #21. Just reviewing all the entries before voting. There are some excellent lists. Your is one. Best of luck! Sue
Comment Written 30-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2009
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sgalletti, thank you so very much. Yes there were some excellent entries. I was a little apprehensive, but I am glad I posted. I had much more than the 22, but thought it a bit too much. again thank you so much. Your review and comments are appreciated so very much.jlsavell
Comment from Shirley B
I loved your list. They are so honest and true. While I was reading each one. I don't know how many times I said 'how true!'. You did a great job. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2009
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I loved your list. They are so honest and true. While I was reading each one. I don't know how many times I said 'how true!'. You did a great job. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 29-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2009
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Shirley B, thank you so very much. I appreciate your wonderful comments and review..jlsavell
Comment from adewpearl
I like the balanced and reasoned nature of so many of the items on your list - your listings have a complexity that goes beyond the rants of some. Many of these invite, even demand, the reader to ponder in order to come up with an adequate response, and I love writing that presents that kind of challenge. I'm not just shouting Amen or feeling the need to throw something at you - I'm thinking!! Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2009
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I like the balanced and reasoned nature of so many of the items on your list - your listings have a complexity that goes beyond the rants of some. Many of these invite, even demand, the reader to ponder in order to come up with an adequate response, and I love writing that presents that kind of challenge. I'm not just shouting Amen or feeling the need to throw something at you - I'm thinking!! Brooke :-)
Comment Written 29-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2009
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adewpearl, girl once again thank you!! It was never meant to provoke the reader to throw stones at me and so I am thrilled. Perhpas some wanted to debate but that is not what I posted it for. It was my observation of mankind. As for politics, I feel it is true. Talk shows, radio shows, fanstory. I know people are passionate about their views but few have learned the art of "tact and deliver". It drives me insane.When you put people on the defensive, you shut off thier desire to listen to anything you have to say. Thank you so very much. Yes I read your piece about Till. You are brilliant and please keep writing such. It brings to the forefront how cruel we humans can be and are to not only man himself, but the animal kingdom and to the Earth. Do not get me wrong, I feel we have good traits too. again thank you..jimi