Holly, the Christmas Fairy
A Fairy alerts Shepherds to the Christmas miracle112 total reviews
Comment from WRITER1
Very nice poem, well written and enjoyable. I don't believe it needs anything removed or added. Wishing you Happy New Year and happy writing.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2008
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Very nice poem, well written and enjoyable. I don't believe it needs anything removed or added. Wishing you Happy New Year and happy writing.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2008
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and a happy new year to you, too! thanks, Brooke
Comment from IndianaIrish
I love this story poem, Brooke! It was a delight to read and your message of love is beautiful. I hope this poem makes "Poem of the Month" contest...it's perfect.
Indy :>)
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2008
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I love this story poem, Brooke! It was a delight to read and your message of love is beautiful. I hope this poem makes "Poem of the Month" contest...it's perfect.
Indy :>)
Comment Written 22-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2008
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Indy, none of my poems have ever made poem of the month, so don't hold your breath. Someone does not like my work where such decisions are made LOL Thanks ever so much for appreciating this poem!! Brooke
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WOW...you never have, Brooke?? How is that even possible? You're a talented, creative poet...I hope whoever it is that makes the selections, get their ... well, you know. LOL
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Nope, in well over a hundred poems, many which people here seem to like, never, and I honestly at this point don't expect to ever. I also don't do well in site-sponsored contests no matter how strong I think my entry is. The taste of the selection committee does not seem to extend to any of my types of poems - the a-z, the memory poems, the fairy poems, the acrostics, nothing. I long since stopped caring about that lost cause - other writers on site are most encouraging and receptive to my writing, and their opinion means a great deal to me. You are most kind. :-) Brooke
Comment from Nicnac
Of all the Christmas poems you have posted so far, this is my favorite. (Great artwork!)
This is a lovely poem that tells a unique story of the glorious birth of Christ. I can imagine this as a small picture book for children. I love it.
This is my favorite stanza:
"She'd faithfully served this commonplace task
though one could argue it seemed too mundane.
While most fairies lived in magical lands,
not once had she balked or thought to complain."
It teaches a good lesson. Many times our jobs or tasks seem mundane or insignificant, but we may not have seen the bigger picture yet!
I love this poem. Bravo, Brooke! Fabulous storytelling.
~Nic
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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Of all the Christmas poems you have posted so far, this is my favorite. (Great artwork!)
This is a lovely poem that tells a unique story of the glorious birth of Christ. I can imagine this as a small picture book for children. I love it.
This is my favorite stanza:
"She'd faithfully served this commonplace task
though one could argue it seemed too mundane.
While most fairies lived in magical lands,
not once had she balked or thought to complain."
It teaches a good lesson. Many times our jobs or tasks seem mundane or insignificant, but we may not have seen the bigger picture yet!
I love this poem. Bravo, Brooke! Fabulous storytelling.
~Nic
Comment Written 19-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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I truly had fun making this one up - I am quite pleased with the result so I am thrilled you like it so much - thank you for your generous and gracious response!! Brooke
Comment from Helvi2
Hi adew,
Your idea to write this was truly inspirational. Adding Holly to the Christmas Story gave it a special touch. The name you chose for her couldn't be more perfect It made the Christmas story we know even more special than it is.
The imagery was off the chart.
When you wrote this your rhyme was so smooth and flawless that at times it seemed to slip through your fingers, you hardly noticed you were reading rhymed poetry. This is far BEYOND exquisite. I have a feeling this poem is going to be around for a long, long time. I am so glad I have a six to give you
God Bless You and Merry Christmas
Helvi :o)
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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Hi adew,
Your idea to write this was truly inspirational. Adding Holly to the Christmas Story gave it a special touch. The name you chose for her couldn't be more perfect It made the Christmas story we know even more special than it is.
The imagery was off the chart.
When you wrote this your rhyme was so smooth and flawless that at times it seemed to slip through your fingers, you hardly noticed you were reading rhymed poetry. This is far BEYOND exquisite. I have a feeling this poem is going to be around for a long, long time. I am so glad I have a six to give you
God Bless You and Merry Christmas
Helvi :o)
Comment Written 19-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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Thank you! This is just a lovely gesture on your part, and your comments are incredibly encouraging. You are most kind and I am most appreciative, Brooke :-)
Comment from okiboy
Oh, what a great poem. Believe it or not, the last several lines sent shivers through me. The line starting with Sweetie Girl, made me stop and chuckle. The poem evoked certain feelings perfectly at the right moment. Very well done. And hurrah to the Christmas Fairy! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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Oh, what a great poem. Believe it or not, the last several lines sent shivers through me. The line starting with Sweetie Girl, made me stop and chuckle. The poem evoked certain feelings perfectly at the right moment. Very well done. And hurrah to the Christmas Fairy! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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I am so glad you enjoyed my little legend so much - I had a joyous time creating this story. Thanks ever so much for sharing these comments with me!!! Brooke
Comment from Seraphim Delphinium
How wonderfully imaginative is this poem! Terrific word composition and poetic mastery. The juxtaposition of the fairy and the fable is absolutely divine! Great work, DewPearl. Blessings to you in this holiday season. Seraph ~
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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How wonderfully imaginative is this poem! Terrific word composition and poetic mastery. The juxtaposition of the fairy and the fable is absolutely divine! Great work, DewPearl. Blessings to you in this holiday season. Seraph ~
Comment Written 19-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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This is one of the most imaginative works I've created, so I truly appreciate your recognizing the thought I put into it!
Thank you!!! Brooke
Comment from daysofdeath1
I loved your use of language in this piece. "the wee-est" very colloquial! great job on this one, i can tell you put your heart into your work.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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I loved your use of language in this piece. "the wee-est" very colloquial! great job on this one, i can tell you put your heart into your work.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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Yes, my heart and imagination both went into this one - "wee-est" is one of my favorite parts, so thank you for acknowledging it, Brandon. Thank you so much, Brooke
Comment from chrisweigand
Great poem. It's nice to think of fairies helping God and the shepherds. Nice word choices to portray the message and the ideas flow smoothly.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
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Great poem. It's nice to think of fairies helping God and the shepherds. Nice word choices to portray the message and the ideas flow smoothly.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
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thanks so much for this gracious response :-) Brooke
Comment from redrider6612
The Holly and the Ivy is one of my favorite carols. I really loved the cadence of your poem, great rhymes, lovely flow. Thank you for a wonderful Christmas poem.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
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The Holly and the Ivy is one of my favorite carols. I really loved the cadence of your poem, great rhymes, lovely flow. Thank you for a wonderful Christmas poem.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
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thank you so very much - I'm so glad you love this carol, too. Brooke
Comment from Tramore
I am so happy I have a six star to give for this beautiful Christmas poem.The holly and the ivy legend has always been a favorite of mine but I have never heard a poem like yours. We sang the "Holly and the Ivy" carol every yead when I was a child. Now I can tell my grandchildren the story of "Holly the Christmas Fairy "which I know they will love.
Blessings.
Tramore
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
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I am so happy I have a six star to give for this beautiful Christmas poem.The holly and the ivy legend has always been a favorite of mine but I have never heard a poem like yours. We sang the "Holly and the Ivy" carol every yead when I was a child. Now I can tell my grandchildren the story of "Holly the Christmas Fairy "which I know they will love.
Blessings.
Tramore
Comment Written 18-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
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The holly and the ivy, in my opinion, is one of the loveliest carols ever - many on site do not know it!! Thank you so very very much for this kind and generous response to my story poem and please tell me how the grandchildren like it!!
Brooke
