Reflections For The New Day
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Dying Daisies And Trampled Hearts"16 total reviews
Comment from bluefly
Hi VP,
Thanks for pointing me toward this piece. It is a beautiful piece of writing and the message shows a great resolve to heal the soul of the self rather than change the way someone else is. Flows smoothly and presented in perfect format. It seems we both found something to say concerning daisies. LOL.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2008
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Hi VP,
Thanks for pointing me toward this piece. It is a beautiful piece of writing and the message shows a great resolve to heal the soul of the self rather than change the way someone else is. Flows smoothly and presented in perfect format. It seems we both found something to say concerning daisies. LOL.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2008
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Thanks blue.
Comment from martinC
Wow
Hi Jewell....this is an incredible poem.
The line..'resolved to stop my crying', has so much impact. It says everything about you and this relationship....how you have been worn down by attrition and resolutely beginning the mending process.
Excellent therapy poem for you...
By the way...I confess I always used to cheat the daisey chain and petal plucking, to make sure Susan 'loved me'
I think it worked...lol
take care
martin
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2008
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Wow
Hi Jewell....this is an incredible poem.
The line..'resolved to stop my crying', has so much impact. It says everything about you and this relationship....how you have been worn down by attrition and resolutely beginning the mending process.
Excellent therapy poem for you...
By the way...I confess I always used to cheat the daisey chain and petal plucking, to make sure Susan 'loved me'
I think it worked...lol
take care
martin
Comment Written 28-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2008
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I always cheated the daisy chain too! Doing so, created a dreamer, didn't it? LOL Thanks for this one too.
Comment from jlsavell
VisionaryPoet, not a real serious write, but therapy??? This is excellent and I undestand each word and phrase. Painfully truthful and I can imagine the forced rhyme..truly a great read, just purging are you?..best wishes..jlsavell
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VisionaryPoet, not a real serious write, but therapy??? This is excellent and I undestand each word and phrase. Painfully truthful and I can imagine the forced rhyme..truly a great read, just purging are you?..best wishes..jlsavell
Comment Written 23-Aug-2008
Comment from HalfHoff
we can be our worst enemy and best doctor, but the two seldom agree who is in charge some days, heh? Really great write dollface! You'll be fine and so will the daisys. XO
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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we can be our worst enemy and best doctor, but the two seldom agree who is in charge some days, heh? Really great write dollface! You'll be fine and so will the daisys. XO
Comment Written 23-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Yep, I'm better already and so is the big plucker LOL Just a little more watering was needed for the soil of our hearts. thank you for the kind review. It's good to hear from you!
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello Jewell and a great bit of therapy it is, if it works, then do it. I enjoyed the read and I follow you friend. I know a lot of flowers have fallen under foot because of broken heart. Loyd
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Hello Jewell and a great bit of therapy it is, if it works, then do it. I enjoyed the read and I follow you friend. I know a lot of flowers have fallen under foot because of broken heart. Loyd
Comment Written 23-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Thank you for your kind words. All is well! Dead flowers make wonderful pot pourri!
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Nice sis, Loyd
Comment from RaymondJohn
Years ago, Rock Hudson was on a Christmas TV show and sang a song. One of the lines was "When I think of all the girls I could have been stuck with." I was really waiting to see how he was going to continue that, but he didn't rhyme the line. I like your poem. wonder where the old "he loves me, he loves me not" comes from. Another great poem. Ray.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Years ago, Rock Hudson was on a Christmas TV show and sang a song. One of the lines was "When I think of all the girls I could have been stuck with." I was really waiting to see how he was going to continue that, but he didn't rhyme the line. I like your poem. wonder where the old "he loves me, he loves me not" comes from. Another great poem. Ray.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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It would be fun to research the root of that tradition wouldn't it? Thank you for your fun review. I got a kick out of the line from the song and your little tale to go along. I appreciate your responses to my work. They are more personal than a critique and that is what online friendships are about. THANK YOU :0)
Comment from Martie
Jewel...you crack me up ....rhyme with pluck...LOL....is of course, stuck. When I was young, oh so many years ago, and bagan to think of "boys" in a way that was new and strange, I used to love me love me not with every daisy's chain.
"I can only mend myself by meeting my own need" You've come a long way daisy!! Hug!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Jewel...you crack me up ....rhyme with pluck...LOL....is of course, stuck. When I was young, oh so many years ago, and bagan to think of "boys" in a way that was new and strange, I used to love me love me not with every daisy's chain.
"I can only mend myself by meeting my own need" You've come a long way daisy!! Hug!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Thanks so much Martie! I surely appreciate your comments and personal review. The daisy chain game was a fun one wasn't it? I remember cheating the chain too when I thought it wouldn't turn out the way I wanted! Hmmm, go figure! Another lesson learned and patterns rooted there. Life is funny and simple like that.
Comment from Kingsland
the spirit is willing
by the lover has left...
this was my first thought after reading your smoothly written poem. It was my sincere pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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the spirit is willing
by the lover has left...
this was my first thought after reading your smoothly written poem. It was my sincere pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
Comment Written 23-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Hello John, my friend. His leaving was temporary. Whew...
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi VP,
Excellent written therapy, I might add. Liked your choice of art and it's perfect with your verse. As usual your rhyme and rhythm are great and the meaning clear. Thank you for sharing this. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Hi VP,
Excellent written therapy, I might add. Liked your choice of art and it's perfect with your verse. As usual your rhyme and rhythm are great and the meaning clear. Thank you for sharing this. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
Comment Written 23-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Thanks my friend for another kind review.
Comment from Diny
Jewell- this read scared me a little and then the notes at the end made me grin- Pluck huh? well I know where you were going let me know if you are ok- I worry bout you sometimes- and now I really wonder- be good and oh--- the picture was great but you do so many things so well not a surprise- hugs- Write on-Di
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Jewell- this read scared me a little and then the notes at the end made me grin- Pluck huh? well I know where you were going let me know if you are ok- I worry bout you sometimes- and now I really wonder- be good and oh--- the picture was great but you do so many things so well not a surprise- hugs- Write on-Di
Comment Written 23-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Diny I lost your physical address from my inbox, arg! Help me with that eh?
