Reflections For The New Day
Viewing comments for Chapter 77 "Hidden Beauty"23 total reviews
Comment from Little Dove
Inner Sanctum, great job; I loved reading your poem. It's flowing nicely, is wonderfully honest and well written. You've done a great job with this poem and please tell Silvergold that the picture is lovely, and compliments the poem nicely. Great job both of you, great job.
LD
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2006
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Inner Sanctum, great job; I loved reading your poem. It's flowing nicely, is wonderfully honest and well written. You've done a great job with this poem and please tell Silvergold that the picture is lovely, and compliments the poem nicely. Great job both of you, great job.
LD
Comment Written 15-Nov-2006
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2006
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Thank you. I was so pleased I found Silvergold's pic too.
Comment from fanlight
Very true words spoken here - we should all try and be like the words of this poem - it was lovely - a pleasure to read - making me want to be a better person - thanks again for sharing your pearls of wisdom - Fanlight
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2006
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Very true words spoken here - we should all try and be like the words of this poem - it was lovely - a pleasure to read - making me want to be a better person - thanks again for sharing your pearls of wisdom - Fanlight
Comment Written 15-Nov-2006
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2006
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Thanks again ...and I think I'll say this for your other reviews coming...lol I appreciate your support.
Comment from fastdigits
A really great piece of writing, matching the photo perfectly with your piece. You extol beautiful thoughts and phrases throughout your rendition, and perhaps your author's notes best reflect the piece,"real treasures never lose their shine, artificial gems do and value was never there to begin with.
Well done
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2006
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A really great piece of writing, matching the photo perfectly with your piece. You extol beautiful thoughts and phrases throughout your rendition, and perhaps your author's notes best reflect the piece,"real treasures never lose their shine, artificial gems do and value was never there to begin with.
Well done
Comment Written 15-Nov-2006
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2006
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Thank you fastdigits for such a warm review of one of my favorite peices.
Comment from drivenbackward
Okay, this was just perfect! You made a point that relates to a constant struggle in my mind. Everything you said was spot-on and words that people should live by. Greed is deception. Excellent poem, all the way around.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2006
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Okay, this was just perfect! You made a point that relates to a constant struggle in my mind. Everything you said was spot-on and words that people should live by. Greed is deception. Excellent poem, all the way around.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2006
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2006
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I sure have come to appreciate your thoughtful reviews. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I know you'd be honest with me if there was a flaw too and that is a good thing. This is something that bothers me every day as I work in the world of beauty. Balance is most important.
Comment from zorman32
"We all end up here one day"
Funny, there's a whole lot of very attractive, young, energetic people who are already there...inside. Trouble is there's no smile attached that means anything in that condition. A real shame.
I loved this poem, it speaks of a higher love that doesnt see with human eyes, but with the heart, selfless, as love should be.
Great job!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2006
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"We all end up here one day"
Funny, there's a whole lot of very attractive, young, energetic people who are already there...inside. Trouble is there's no smile attached that means anything in that condition. A real shame.
I loved this poem, it speaks of a higher love that doesnt see with human eyes, but with the heart, selfless, as love should be.
Great job!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2006
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2006
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Thanks Zor
Comment from 24chas
I really can appreciate the wisdom in your words, Jewell. I think you are right on with what you write. Reminds me of Ecclesiasties.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2006
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I really can appreciate the wisdom in your words, Jewell. I think you are right on with what you write. Reminds me of Ecclesiasties.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2006
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2006
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Thanks you. I love Ecclesiasties.
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Jewell. This is such a beautiful poem. The rhythm and rhyme scheme are good and the imagery is awesome, for example, "Loveliness cannot be measured by the glitter in the night." Stunning
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2006
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Hi Jewell. This is such a beautiful poem. The rhythm and rhyme scheme are good and the imagery is awesome, for example, "Loveliness cannot be measured by the glitter in the night." Stunning
Comment Written 15-Nov-2006
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2006
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Stunning~ I like that. thank you wendyanne.
Comment from B Weylin
Hey IS,
This is another solid poem. The rhyme is smooth and natural throughout and the meter is solid up until the last two lines. I recommend:
Loveliness cannot be measured
By glitter in the night
For a jewel will never glisten
In the absence of pure light
That feels a bit more natural to me. I liked this piece a lot, looking forward to reading more
WWRR
B~
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2006
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Hey IS,
This is another solid poem. The rhyme is smooth and natural throughout and the meter is solid up until the last two lines. I recommend:
Loveliness cannot be measured
By glitter in the night
For a jewel will never glisten
In the absence of pure light
That feels a bit more natural to me. I liked this piece a lot, looking forward to reading more
WWRR
B~
Comment Written 15-Nov-2006
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2006
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Good suggestions, thank you.
Comment from suresh kumar
Hi Jewell,
Inner beauty vs outer beauty. Which one is long-lasting and whis one should be cherished. The inner beauty will always win. Outer beauty ages and withers. Innner beauty is eternal. Nice poem. This is the first time I see you writing a full poem without breaks. Nice job.
.suresh kumar.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2006
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Hi Jewell,
Inner beauty vs outer beauty. Which one is long-lasting and whis one should be cherished. The inner beauty will always win. Outer beauty ages and withers. Innner beauty is eternal. Nice poem. This is the first time I see you writing a full poem without breaks. Nice job.
.suresh kumar.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2006
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2006
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Trying new things suresh. Thanks.
Comment from HappyB8888
Can't see anything wrong with this pup, Jewell! No idea why the view/review thingie happens. I just write it off to newbies who want to make a quick buck without much work. LOL You and I both know you're an excellent poet. Keep your head up and keep crafting poems like this one!! Loved it!! And remember:
A Jewell never glistens
In the absence of pure light
The people passing you by are not of the light!!
That Happy Chica,
Marcia Ellen
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2006
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Can't see anything wrong with this pup, Jewell! No idea why the view/review thingie happens. I just write it off to newbies who want to make a quick buck without much work. LOL You and I both know you're an excellent poet. Keep your head up and keep crafting poems like this one!! Loved it!! And remember:
A Jewell never glistens
In the absence of pure light
The people passing you by are not of the light!!
That Happy Chica,
Marcia Ellen
Comment Written 15-Nov-2006
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2006
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thanks Hun, I appreciate it bunches.
