2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is sad but deep. It simultaneously strikes a nerve and melts me.
Gypsy, did you want that first line to read 'died' rather than 'die?'
I'm glad I got to read this today.
Xoxo
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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This is sad but deep. It simultaneously strikes a nerve and melts me.
Gypsy, did you want that first line to read 'died' rather than 'die?'
I'm glad I got to read this today.
Xoxo
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much, may you have a year full of prosperity, good health, love, and good writings.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
since dad die -- did you mean DIED? (past tense?)
cool senryu - spiders are artists with their webs...
smooth flowing well thought-out lines
thank you for sharing and happy new year!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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since dad die -- did you mean DIED? (past tense?)
cool senryu - spiders are artists with their webs...
smooth flowing well thought-out lines
thank you for sharing and happy new year!
shelley :)
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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I have 'died' ... maybe I fixed around the same time, anyway, it's fixed now. Thank you!
Thank you very much.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
One might see the sadness in the abandoned house, but on can also see how life continues, different but moves along. Thanks for sharing. Hope you're having a great day.
RJ
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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One might see the sadness in the abandoned house, but on can also see how life continues, different but moves along. Thanks for sharing. Hope you're having a great day.
RJ
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much. Happy New Year! may it be full of laughter, love, prosperity, and good writing.
Gypsy hugs
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Thank you, I pray you have a great year as well.
RJ
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....sad but inevitable part of living we all will face hopefully not anytime soon. My Dad died a couple years ago, and while we knew it was coming, he had dementia, it's still a shock
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....sad but inevitable part of living we all will face hopefully not anytime soon. My Dad died a couple years ago, and while we knew it was coming, he had dementia, it's still a shock
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much. Happy New Year! may it be full of laughter, love, prosperity, and good writing.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem is hurtful to read, yet so real. It's one of those so often cold hard truths. Thank you for sharing this poem and this presentation. Both are excellent.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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This poem is hurtful to read, yet so real. It's one of those so often cold hard truths. Thank you for sharing this poem and this presentation. Both are excellent.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Nicki.B
This is a sad and touching poem which I'm sure many could relate to, the loneliness following the loss of a parent, but I love the angle you captured it with. Well done.
Did you mean 'Dad died'
Best Wishes
Nicki x
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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This is a sad and touching poem which I'm sure many could relate to, the loneliness following the loss of a parent, but I love the angle you captured it with. Well done.
Did you mean 'Dad died'
Best Wishes
Nicki x
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much. Happy New Year! may it be full of laughter, love, prosperity, and good writing.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That's sad. Did you mean "since Dad died" in the first line? I wonder how those spiders get so productive and where they get the energy to spin so many webs!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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That's sad. Did you mean "since Dad died" in the first line? I wonder how those spiders get so productive and where they get the energy to spin so many webs!
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much, big sister. I fixed it. 😊😘
Happy New Year! may it be full of laughter, love, prosperity, and good writing.
love,
marival
Comment from kahpot
Wonderful, though sad, as I am learning short forms and you my mentor, may I ask, since dad die," why not (died) none the less, beautifully written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Wonderful, though sad, as I am learning short forms and you my mentor, may I ask, since dad die," why not (died) none the less, beautifully written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much. Happy New Year! may it be full of laughter, love, prosperity, and good writing.
Gypsy hugs
