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A faithful servant.

A poem

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Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Your deep faith, that is so much a part of you, shines through well in this beautifully rhymed poem, Roy, and I hope your journey still keeps on for many years yet. Cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
    Thanks Valda for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Roy,
I wish I shared your fervor. I believe you're much more dedicated than I. I don't doubt that you'll hear Jesus say "Well done good and faithful servant' Until that day, I guess we need to keep plugging along. Well done.
Have a blessed day.
Tom

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thanks Tom, for these splendid comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Carol Clark2
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You used great rhymes here and a steady rhythm pattern. The poem flows well. I especially like the use of 'graduation day' and your longing to hear the words, 'Well done.' I'm sure you'll be hearing them on that day. Blessings, and merry Christmas. Carol

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thanks Carol for these splendid comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by Carol Clark2 on 18-Dec-2024
    You're welcome. I enjoyed your poem. Looking forward to that graduation day! Carol
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
    Amen
Comment from Father Flaps
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Hi Roy,
This is one of your best poems. I'm sure the good Lord Himself loves reading your poetry.
I especially like the title you gave Him, "attorney". I'd capitalize it, though... "Attorney", for Jesus is our mediator. I'd also capitalize "Savior".
"For there is one God and one mediator between God and mankind, the man Christ Jesus." ...1 Timothy 2:5
Nicely penned, Roy! I enjoyed it first thing this morning. I hope you live to be a very old man!
Blessings,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thanks Kim, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Roy.
As you allude to in your poem, all any true believer ever really wants to hear is the Lord's commendation of, " Well done my good and faithful servant."
Robert

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thanks Robert for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 18-Dec-2024
    You're welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
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Amen! Those are the words we learn to hear and by His Spirit, we will run our race and complete the tasks He has created for us to do long before anyone was born. Beautiful poem about our goal in life and our worth in the Lord!

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thanks Helen for these splendid comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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This work of yours is good of course. I hope you are able to enjoy your holidays. The weather has gotten warmer here for a few days. Family and friends will keep you warm. Love to you and yours this season. Karen

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thanks Karen, for these splendid comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 18-Dec-2024
    "-)
Comment from jim vecchio
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You certainly have used your talents in a pleasing way to The Lord. I am getting up there and my resolve is to please him. Your words always serve to inspire me.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
    Thanks Jim, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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In Sunday School since Thanksgiving, we're studying advent. This week was on Joy but heavily touched on being humble. Which is very hard for us humans. We discussed the humbleness of Jesus, even though He was God on Earth. Your poem fits in this with subject. Thank you.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
    Thanks Barbara for these super comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from ESOSTINE
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What a beautifully penned poem, filled the hope of an everlasting life with Christ when the earthly trip comes to destined fate. It is a reminder that those who walk in the precepts of the Lord are blessed to share in His glory. Well done, dear Roy. I enjoyed this like every other of your works.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
    Thanks for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy