Ellie's First Snow Adventure
The wonder of the first snowfall7 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a charming little story of Ellie's first snow adventure. It's beautifully and magically written and reminds me of The Snowman with its gentle awakening to the wonders outside. The last sentence is superb and clinches it for me. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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This is a charming little story of Ellie's first snow adventure. It's beautifully and magically written and reminds me of The Snowman with its gentle awakening to the wonders outside. The last sentence is superb and clinches it for me. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, you now have 4 votes.
Yes you captured the wonderment and magic of snow.
There was beauty in the simplicity of your narrative.
A joy to read!
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Ciao poet, you now have 4 votes.
Yes you captured the wonderment and magic of snow.
There was beauty in the simplicity of your narrative.
A joy to read!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely written for the contest and I wish you the very best in your contest. I have a great goddaughter whose name is Ellie. So this particular form caught my attention. May you have a good day and God bless. Patricia.
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This is very nicely written for the contest and I wish you the very best in your contest. I have a great goddaughter whose name is Ellie. So this particular form caught my attention. May you have a good day and God bless. Patricia.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
What a great flash fiction story. It was upbeat and flowed fast. It's always wonderful when a child sees snow for the first time. The innocence and joy they get from it.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
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What a great flash fiction story. It was upbeat and flowed fast. It's always wonderful when a child sees snow for the first time. The innocence and joy they get from it.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
Comment from Nicki.B
What a gorgeous story. You told it so well. I brought back fond memories of the rare snowy days we spend with the kids when they were little. We had so much fun we would play until our toes and fingers were numb, go home to warm up with hot chocolate I'm front of the fire.
Well done this a wonderful entry for the contest. Good luck with it!
Best Wishes
Nicki
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What a gorgeous story. You told it so well. I brought back fond memories of the rare snowy days we spend with the kids when they were little. We had so much fun we would play until our toes and fingers were numb, go home to warm up with hot chocolate I'm front of the fire.
Well done this a wonderful entry for the contest. Good luck with it!
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I absolutely love how you capture the magic of Ellie's first snowfall! The way you describe the world through her eyes is so charming. I felt like like I was right there with her. It's so heartwarming and I can just imagine Ellie's excitement and wonder. Keep up the great work!
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I absolutely love how you capture the magic of Ellie's first snowfall! The way you describe the world through her eyes is so charming. I felt like like I was right there with her. It's so heartwarming and I can just imagine Ellie's excitement and wonder. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, the wonders of that first snowfall!! What a poignant little story for this contest today -- thanx for the smile we could all use!! ;) Good luck in the contest! ;)
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Oh, the wonders of that first snowfall!! What a poignant little story for this contest today -- thanx for the smile we could all use!! ;) Good luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024