Miracles
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
Revenge is so sweet, and for Doyle, being on that side of it, he finally felt what his victims felt. From the emotions of romance and love to the emotions of hate and revenge served sweet. Well done Carol,
cheers.
valda
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Revenge is so sweet, and for Doyle, being on that side of it, he finally felt what his victims felt. From the emotions of romance and love to the emotions of hate and revenge served sweet. Well done Carol,
cheers.
valda
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Yes, Doyle got what he had coming.... He destroyed a lot of lives without ever giving it one thought. Greed and his own motivations were all that counted with him.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
Eleanor definitely has some tricks up her sleeve! Handy having a ghost around to get justice still on this side of the Great Divide. It is very satisfying seeing Doyle get his just desserts.
Nice closure for all the misery he has caused.
Julie
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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Eleanor definitely has some tricks up her sleeve! Handy having a ghost around to get justice still on this side of the Great Divide. It is very satisfying seeing Doyle get his just desserts.
Nice closure for all the misery he has caused.
Julie
:-)
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Yes, Eleanor is a great sleuth and its nice that she's on our side. Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
Eleanor knows she will not stop until she gets justice for what has happened to her family, she is definitely a force to be reckoned with and I wouldn't like to get on the wrong side of her. Another entertaining chapter, Carol, I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Eleanor knows she will not stop until she gets justice for what has happened to her family, she is definitely a force to be reckoned with and I wouldn't like to get on the wrong side of her. Another entertaining chapter, Carol, I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Sorry I am so far behind in answering and thanking everyone for their kindness and enjoyment with the story. Three little girls (well not so little anymore) kept me very busy. I miss them already but thankfully I will surprise them for Christmas. Appreciate your time and thoughts as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This wonderful comeuppance on Doyle has the ring of Dickens' Scrooge and ghostly visitations about it, albeit much more extreme and enjoyable! Your vivid and detailed encounters with his victims are a delight to read as we will Eleanor on to heap more and more punishment on this malevolent judge. Well done, Carol. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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This wonderful comeuppance on Doyle has the ring of Dickens' Scrooge and ghostly visitations about it, albeit much more extreme and enjoyable! Your vivid and detailed encounters with his victims are a delight to read as we will Eleanor on to heap more and more punishment on this malevolent judge. Well done, Carol. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Sorry I am so far behind in answering and thanking everyone for their kindness and enjoyment with the story. Three little girls (well not so little anymore) kept me very busy. I miss them already but thankfully I will surprise them for Christmas. Appreciate your time and thoughts as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sanku
I came to this story very late ,I think .The nightmare made sense when I read that Eleanor is a ghost detective..That was a real judgement and punishment .I am sorry i didnt come into this story before...
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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I came to this story very late ,I think .The nightmare made sense when I read that Eleanor is a ghost detective..That was a real judgement and punishment .I am sorry i didnt come into this story before...
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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This is the third book in a series and I have enjoyed writing and making Eleanor and the gang come alive. Maybe when I publish it, you'll honor me by purchasing a copy and enjoying all of it.
Thank you so much for your comments. The last chapter is posted.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
That is definitely a chapter filled with horror. But it takes something as powerful as that to help him to really understand what he put others through. Powerfully written. Worthy of a six.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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That is definitely a chapter filled with horror. But it takes something as powerful as that to help him to really understand what he put others through. Powerfully written. Worthy of a six.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Doyle deserved that and so much more even though I don't like writing the horror. I kept thinking of the Christmas Carol as I wrote. The last chapter which is posted should help make up for the evil.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Good job meting out justice to the judge. A life of nightmares and occasional assaults living in the general population until someone kills him. Certainly no one to shed tears over. Should be a popular book.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Good job meting out justice to the judge. A life of nightmares and occasional assaults living in the general population until someone kills him. Certainly no one to shed tears over. Should be a popular book.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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He probably deserved worse but I gave him a good once over. Lol Thanks so much.
Comment from royowen
I'm afraid there is a place where unrepentant people will go, and no amount of pleading will escape that, sorrow and regret is not quite enough where evil is concerned, the satanic angels will taste their eternal judgement in time, time is a figment sin's illusion, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I'm afraid there is a place where unrepentant people will go, and no amount of pleading will escape that, sorrow and regret is not quite enough where evil is concerned, the satanic angels will taste their eternal judgement in time, time is a figment sin's illusion, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I'm sure Doyle is the kind of person who will never learn his lesson nor repent (except to try and get his way) abd he will end up going to that place.
Smiles, Carol
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I agree the epitome of someone of whom he resembles, you have good image of Satan Himself Carol.
Comment from Carol Clark2
Wow, that's some kind of justice Eleanor meted out on Doyle! I can't imagine having those nightmares every night. And then to lose his privileges and end up with those he put behind bars -- that should put an end to Doyle. Great chapter, clever punishments. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Wow, that's some kind of justice Eleanor meted out on Doyle! I can't imagine having those nightmares every night. And then to lose his privileges and end up with those he put behind bars -- that should put an end to Doyle. Great chapter, clever punishments. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I thought the reader had simply had enough of his crooked ways and he needed to be punished. The Christmas Carol came to mind and that's where the story began. Thanks so much.
Smiles, Carol
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Agreed! Doyle has hurt so many people.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Bravo my friend. This is an awesome chapter. That's what Doyle deserves to be in gen pop where he'll get the living shit kicked out of him. What a beautiful ending for him.
You're almost there my friend. Another chapter or two and you'll be finished with this awesome book and you can relax until your next book.
Great job my friend.
Cecilia xoxo
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Carol,
Bravo my friend. This is an awesome chapter. That's what Doyle deserves to be in gen pop where he'll get the living shit kicked out of him. What a beautiful ending for him.
You're almost there my friend. Another chapter or two and you'll be finished with this awesome book and you can relax until your next book.
Great job my friend.
Cecilia xoxo
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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The final chapter is written and I'll post it in the morning. I would have preferred a Sunday when everyone gets their sixes, but it is what it is. I just hope everyone is pleased with the ending. Thanks as always. You are the best! A six on a Friday.. that's like two Christmases in December! LOL
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Carol,
You're welcome. Only the best for you my friend.
Cecilia xoxo